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Marshmallow Creme

When creme flows, dripping With sugary confection Stir in rice crispies! For Raul's contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/25/2010 10:26:00 AM

Stir stir stir very quickly it is so cold in that picture. I wish you the best in Raul's contest Doris. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/25/2010 8:27:00 AM

Ahh...yum....marshmallow creme,....I never thought of that one !!! Great imagination, Doris!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/25/2010 4:06:00 AM

Well I bet that no one can top that one. Mom

Simone Segal

Date: 2/25/2010 12:11:00 AM

This poem has brought back sweet memories! love Simone

Skat A

Date: 2/24/2010 8:41:00 PM

I want a snack all of a sudden. Yummy haiku. Really enjoyed the read....

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/24/2010 7:50:00 PM

Yummy ..sounds delightful Doris.. good luck in the new contest.. luv that title.. unique write.. my entry is Liquidity.. u may have already read... thankxxx for sharing ..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/24/2010 7:09:00 PM

Doris, is this for the ice picture? hmmm, I will have to go see that picture again and try to imagine rice crispies in it. YUM!

Amy Thompson

Date: 2/24/2010 6:59:00 PM

Dear Doris, I find this a very harmonious and pleasant place to read poetry. I have enjoyed some of yours today, and I look forward to coming back to read more poems. Thanks for your comment. Love, Amy.