Marshmallow Creme

When creme flows, dripping
With sugary confection
Stir in rice crispies!


For Raul's contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 10:26 AM
Stir stir stir very quickly it is so cold in that picture. I wish you the best in Raul's contest Doris. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 8:27 AM
Ahh...yum....marshmallow creme,....I never thought of that one !!! Great imagination, Doris!!
Kendrick Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 4:06 AM
Well I bet that no one can top that one. Mom
Segal Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 12:11 AM
This poem has brought back sweet memories! love Simone
A  Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 8:41 PM
I want a snack all of a sudden. Yummy haiku. Really enjoyed the read....
Sweetheart Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 7:50 PM
Yummy ..sounds delightful Doris.. good luck in the new contest.. luv that title.. unique write.. my entry is Liquidity.. u may have already read... thankxxx for sharing ..luv.. Linda-Marie..
Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 7:09 PM
Doris, is this for the ice picture? hmmm, I will have to go see that picture again and try to imagine rice crispies in it. YUM!
Thompson Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 6:59 PM
Dear Doris, I find this a very harmonious and pleasant place to read poetry. I have enjoyed some of yours today, and I look forward to coming back to read more poems. Thanks for your comment. Love, Amy.
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