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Mars Real Estate

I procured this entire planet For you, the world was never enough A honeymoon real estate Somewhere to relax and have a laugh I wanted something private Private islands are a dime-a-dozen This is a great future investment On Mars, you'd be the first citizen Girl, our love is a hot red iron Spreading on the red planet like wildfire You know I'm not just a businessman But a spaceman...rockets burning with desire Thabang Jan Ngoma 06-21-2015 Sponsor: Joe Maverick Contest: Subject Mars

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Carol Eastman

Date: 7/27/2015 9:59:00 AM

A very unique write... Loved it. Congrats on the win!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/27/2015 1:25:00 AM

Congrats on ur wonderful winning gem of a poem Thabang! Brilliant work!

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/26/2015 11:56:00 PM

Cool wrote, Thabang, well done. Viv

Thabang Ngoma
Date: 7/27/2015 12:10:00 AM

Morning Viv...thanks a mil...rgds, Thabang

Skat A

Date: 7/26/2015 5:05:00 PM

THABANG Congratulations on your MARS win :) **SKAT**

Thabang Ngoma
Date: 7/27/2015 12:11:00 AM

Hi Skatie...this was a fun contest...much appreciated Tbang

Jan Allison

Date: 7/26/2015 12:22:00 PM

aw I'm sure she would go with you to infinity and beyond Thabang - love your unique take on the theme - many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx7

Thabang Ngoma
Date: 7/26/2015 3:04:00 PM

Hi Jan...thanks. How I wish I had that kind of money, but I'm sure in the near future people will start considering buying property in outer space...seems plausible...other planets or moons or even entire star systems...(:heers, Tbang