Thabang Ngoma Poet Rhyme

Mars Real Estate

I procured this entire planet
For you, the world was never enough
A honeymoon real estate
Somewhere to relax and have a laugh

I wanted something private
Private islands are a dime-a-dozen
This is a great future investment
On Mars, you'd be the first citizen

Girl, our love is a hot red iron
Spreading on the red planet like wildfire
You know I'm not just a businessman
But a spaceman...rockets burning with desire

Thabang Jan Ngoma
06-21-2015

Sponsor: Joe Maverick
Contest: Subject Mars

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Carol Eastman July 27, 2015 at 9:59 AM A very unique write... Loved it. Congrats on the win!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 27, 2015 at 1:25 AM Congrats on ur wonderful winning gem of a poem Thabang! Brilliant work!

Viv Wigley July 26, 2015 at 11:56 PM Cool wrote, Thabang, well done. Viv Thabang Ngoma July 27, 2015 at 12:10 AM Morning Viv...thanks a mil...rgds, Thabang

Skat A July 26, 2015 at 5:05 PM THABANG Congratulations on your MARS win :) **SKAT** Thabang Ngoma July 27, 2015 at 12:11 AM Hi Skatie...this was a fun contest...much appreciated Tbang

Jan Allison July 26, 2015 at 12:22 PM aw I'm sure she would go with you to infinity and beyond Thabang - love your unique take on the theme - many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx7 Thabang Ngoma July 26, 2015 at 3:04 PM Hi Jan...thanks. How I wish I had that kind of money, but I'm sure in the near future people will start considering buying property in outer space...seems plausible...other planets or moons or even entire star systems...(:heers, Tbang