Marriage Vow

My Life is my past

Your Life is your history

Our Life - our future
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 5:47 AM
Congratulations on your win Ralph in Linda-Marie's contest "Awesome Advice"(For The Bride & Groom). Love, Carol
Haick Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 7:12 PM
Awesome advice, Ralph! Congratulations on your 3rd Place Win! Real good advice! Peace, Audrey
Kendrick Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 4:19 AM
Good idea for this Senryu...If about a present point in your life, you have the right idea...Sara
Cwiak Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 8:57 PM
The future is all that a couple can look to when they are first married, but sometimes it has to be said. You did it very well, Ralph. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
Roberts Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 6:11 PM
wonderfully put, congrats on your win
Johnson Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 4:13 PM
Nice reading and good advice. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 7:45 AM
Congrats Ralph on your success in my contest..however the system will not allow me to finalize or post my winning list .. so enjoy my friend.. with luv..ciao..
Dietrich Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 8:37 PM
a fav!
Dietrich Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 8:36 PM
oh, this is REALLY good. I sure hope it placed?? LUv, Andrea
Roberts Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 2:00 PM
beautiful, good luck in the contest
Neels Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 12:26 PM
Wow Ralph, I'm at lost for words.. This is what marriage should be about, building a future together.. Great write, xxxWilma
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