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Marriage Proposal

Moment I had waited whole my life, Through my joys and bounds of strife, Will it happen not or will it be, That he proposes to marry me ? The first day as our eyes carved, For togetherness as if they starved, Wasn't sure the day would be, That he proposes to marry me ? Those romantic meetings secretly, As the passion grew tempestuously, Resistance from family if, let it be, That when he proposes to marry me? Today is the day and now the moment, Dreams and desires trued prudent ! Written September 21st, 2014 For contest 'Will you marry me' by Judy Konos Awarded 1st place

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Date: 9/30/2014 12:41:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Dr. Sharma
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Date: 9/28/2014 6:21:00 AM
- Dr. Upma, congrats with your winning poem - A wonderful 1st place !!! - Enjoy reading it - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/28/2014 5:48:00 AM
Dropping back to congratulate you for thius great win, Dr. Upma
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Date: 9/27/2014 6:23:00 PM
Congratulations Upma on a deserved win and on twenty years of married bliss! God bless! // paul
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/28/2014 12:44:00 AM
Thnx Paul for ur wishes n sweet words!
Date: 9/27/2014 11:17:00 AM
Thank you for entering my contest!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/28/2014 12:44:00 AM
Thnx Judy for the high ranking n liking my poem!
Date: 9/27/2014 10:05:00 AM
Congratulation Dr. Sharma on your win.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/27/2014 11:09:00 AM
Thnx Maurice ! U r kind to me!
Date: 9/27/2014 8:33:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xxx
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/27/2014 11:09:00 AM
Thnx Jan for ur continues wishes my friend!
Date: 9/24/2014 12:30:00 AM
Another one with a great proposal! I hope your marriage is still going strong!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/27/2014 11:08:00 AM
Oh yes Andrea twenty years now! N we still r crazy for each other!
Date: 9/21/2014 3:52:00 PM
Very lovely Dr. Sharma. Good luck on the contest.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/27/2014 11:10:00 AM
Thnx Brenda!
Date: 9/21/2014 2:41:00 PM
touching deeply truly light of forever beauty shine
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/28/2014 12:46:00 AM
Thnx liam
Date: 9/21/2014 1:08:00 PM
spoken with loving tenderness... beautiful, dr upma.. huggs
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/28/2014 12:45:00 AM
Thnx Nette for ur kind words!
Date: 9/21/2014 11:26:00 AM
A nice poem of anticipation..good luck in the contest
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/21/2014 11:36:00 AM
Thnx Frederic!
Date: 9/21/2014 9:42:00 AM
a wonderful proposal:-) God luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/21/2014 9:45:00 AM
Thnx jan!
Date: 9/21/2014 9:34:00 AM
Love the proposal, a passion in two hearts erupt :)
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/21/2014 9:46:00 AM
Thnx sweetie!
Date: 9/21/2014 8:55:00 AM
Nice take on will you marry me, Dr. Upma
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/21/2014 9:00:00 AM
Thnx Dr Ram!
Date: 9/21/2014 8:21:00 AM
A wonderful proposal...hugs Tim
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/21/2014 8:22:00 AM
Thnx dear friend!

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