Marriage Proposal

Moment I had waited whole my life,
Through my joys and bounds of strife,
Will it happen not or will it be,
That he proposes to marry me ?

The first day as our eyes carved,
For togetherness as if they starved,
Wasn't sure the day would be,
That he proposes to marry me ?

Those romantic meetings secretly,
As the passion grew tempestuously,
Resistance from family if, let it be,
That when he proposes to marry me?

Today is the day and now the moment,
Dreams and desires trued prudent !



Written September 21st, 2014
For contest 'Will you marry me' by Judy Konos

Awarded 1st place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Meier-Hans Avatar
September 30, 2014 at 12:41 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Dr. Sharma
Andresen Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 6:21 AM
- Dr. Upma, congrats with your winning poem - A wonderful 1st place !!! - Enjoy reading it - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mehta Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 5:48 AM
Dropping back to congratulate you for thius great win, Dr. Upma
Callus Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 6:23 PM
Congratulations Upma on a deserved win and on twenty years of married bliss! God bless! // paul
A. Sharma Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 12:44 AM
Thnx Paul for ur wishes n sweet words!
Konos Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 11:17 AM
Thank you for entering my contest!
A. Sharma Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 12:44 AM
Thnx Judy for the high ranking n liking my poem!
Yvonne Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 10:05 AM
Congratulation Dr. Sharma on your win.
A. Sharma Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 11:09 AM
Thnx Maurice ! U r kind to me!
Allison Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 8:33 AM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xxx
A. Sharma Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 11:09 AM
Thnx Jan for ur continues wishes my friend!
Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 12:30 AM
Another one with a great proposal! I hope your marriage is still going strong!
A. Sharma Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 11:08 AM
Oh yes Andrea twenty years now! N we still r crazy for each other!
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 3:52 PM
Very lovely Dr. Sharma. Good luck on the contest.
A. Sharma Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 11:10 AM
Thnx Brenda!
Mcdaid Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 2:41 PM
touching deeply truly light of forever beauty shine
A. Sharma Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 12:46 AM
Thnx liam
Onclaud Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 1:08 PM
spoken with loving tenderness... beautiful, dr upma.. huggs
A. Sharma Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 12:45 AM
Thnx Nette for ur kind words!
Parker Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 11:26 AM
A nice poem of anticipation..good luck in the contest
A. Sharma Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 11:36 AM
Thnx Frederic!
Allison Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 9:42 AM
a wonderful proposal:-) God luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
A. Sharma Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 9:45 AM
Thnx jan!
Nance Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 9:34 AM
Love the proposal, a passion in two hearts erupt :)
A. Sharma Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 9:46 AM
Thnx sweetie!
Mehta Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 8:55 AM
Nice take on will you marry me, Dr. Upma
A. Sharma Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 9:00 AM
Thnx Dr Ram!
Smith Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 8:21 AM
A wonderful proposal...hugs Tim
A. Sharma Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 8:22 AM
Thnx dear friend!
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