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Marriage of Sorts

Wife: when I met her first, she was a dream me: she said if rich we could be a team father-in law: looked like would die next day me- he gave consent if I mend my way mother in law: love her don’t get me wrong me:without her, marriage would be a song brother- in law: walked with Eastwood hat me: I could quickly see he was a tw*t Sister-in-law: young pretty in her vest me: If I had wed her would have been best All: So this life is full of luckless fate, me:if you are planning wedding- please wait!! love: If you are young looking for dates advice: stay home spend time with mates! Written 22/02/2021 Charles Messina sponsored List with a twist contest

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Date: 4/19/2021 6:55:00 AM
lol this is funny and witty, you're a cheeky one i can tell! congrats on your contest win.:)
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/19/2021 10:33:00 AM
Thanks Charlotte! pleased you like it!! :)
Date: 4/18/2021 9:37:00 AM
So witty and clever picture of human emotions around marriage, Krish! Really well done! Very creative take on the theme. Congrats and kudos!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/18/2021 10:06:00 AM
Thanks my friend!! Yes, life is funny depending on how we look at it! I am glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 4/18/2021 9:18:00 AM
Our fingers crossed worked. You are on the list, and well deservedly so!! Congrats, Krish.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/18/2021 10:07:00 AM
Thanks Andrea! Pleased it was placed! Interesting contest!!
Date: 4/17/2021 8:47:00 PM
hahaha! Congrats on your top win, Krish!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/17/2021 11:07:00 PM
Hi Seeker, Thank you very much!:)
Date: 4/17/2021 10:11:00 AM
Hi Krish, A wonderful win and an awesome poem. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/17/2021 11:06:00 PM
Thanks Jennifer! An interesting contest with many hood poems! Pleased mine was liked!
Date: 2/24/2021 1:36:00 AM
Haha... thanks for the laugh Krishji. Best wishes in the contest. Hope you are fine and back to Soup and writing more poems...Have a blessed day.. ~ Ani
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/24/2021 2:29:00 AM
Thanks Ani, Yes. Trying to get back to my routine. Thanks for your support.
Date: 2/23/2021 9:41:00 AM
You did this very well. Enjoyed reading your fun poem. Have a blessed day ahead. Take care, Rama
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/23/2021 9:44:00 AM
Thanks Rama! Hope it works! different syle!
Date: 2/22/2021 11:19:00 PM
Great parody. I loved the dialogue. Wonder what your decision will be. ~~
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/23/2021 5:13:00 AM
Victor thanks! as GB Shaw said there are two great tragedies in life - one is to get married, the other is not to!!
Date: 2/22/2021 3:35:00 PM
oh this is so dandy (says Andie Pandie)!! Love it
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/23/2021 5:14:00 AM
Hi Andrea Thanks!! Glad you like it! Not sure if Charles will like it. fingers crossed!

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