Marriage Advice Senryu

sometimes you will fight
never go to bed angry -
work it out with love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 5:46 AM
Congratulations on your win Joe in Linda-Marie's contest "Awesome Advice"(For The Bride & Groom). Love, Carol
Cwiak Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 8:55 PM
Simple words of wisdom. Great write, Joe. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
Rhinem Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 7:18 PM
Ps. Smile ~ I wanted to stop back by to let yourself know "Dear Joe," that I am going to fave this poe because, "It Is A Very Beautiful View, Within This Life;" Bye Again My Dear Friend!:) ~
Rhinem Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 7:02 PM
Smile ~ My deceased wife used to share this very philosophy from her own mother unto myself and, it was Always a part of Our Loves lifes together ~ So beautiful to see "Your Blessed & Gifted Heart & Pen" sharing such wisdom with others; "Beautiful Poem Joe" ~ "Much Love & Warmth to You & Your Loves Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Evening, Within The Warmth of Those You Love;" Bye!:) ~
Roberts Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 6:10 PM
good advice, congrats on your win
Johnson Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 4:12 PM
Wisdom speaking. Very nice. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Taylor Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 3:30 PM
Congrats, Joe. Nice going. Ralph
Sweetheart Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 7:55 AM
Congrats Joe on your success in my contest ..however the system is down and will not allow me to finalize or post my winners list today.. so enjoy my friend.. with luv..ciao..
Devonshire Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 6:34 PM
And if you have trouble working it out, just stay up all night trying, right, Joe? It takes a lot of effort to make relationships work and sometimes the efforts don't succeed. But you have to try! Good advice for the bride and groom. Best wishes for success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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