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I look at you and I don't want you 
Stopped needing your kiss and touch
Needed you to love me for me
Tried to get you to do your part
Make memories and cherish those made
Buried in depression
Covered in guilt and pain
Still I stayed
Looking for a way out
Wanting to be anywhere but here
Going across the bridge I want to drive off
Fly into the sky
Fall into the river below
'Til death do us part

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 11/7/2010 4:01:00 PM
very heart felt. funny i should run accross this now. when it should mean so much to me personally. speek these words to me ; in person and i'll change. i'll make a bond stronger than any marriage could be. i'll join my soul with thee if you would but agree. but only be brave, speek these words to me.
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Date: 9/18/2010 10:19:00 AM
Very sad poem. Touching. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/17/2010 6:59:00 AM
I will endevour to keep you in my prayers. Thanks for wriring this poem, I think it was done for me. Much luv sis. God bless and be encouraged. Joy (Jew)
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Date: 9/16/2010 2:31:00 AM
The emotions of feeling trapped is so brilliantly penned in this write.. would be sad if it is based on reality.. thanks for sharing
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Date: 9/15/2010 4:31:00 PM
Wow termoil. Marriage upheaval. Ooooh! the last line brings sudders to my spine. I know it well and hear it every day. Thanx for the reality shot. brillant write girlfriend
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Date: 9/15/2010 4:30:00 AM
so desperate a poem...hope you are not really that sad and stuck. take care and thanks for checking out my poems!!
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Date: 9/14/2010 10:39:00 PM
Welcome to the Soup. This write speaks the truth about a lot of people across the world. thanks for reading my write. Peace and love, sis.
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Date: 9/12/2010 10:24:00 PM
thanks for reading my poem. I like this and hope it is fiction. If not, I hope you find that way out and find peace. God Bless. Vernette
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Date: 9/12/2010 6:34:00 PM
i know this feeling all too well. i have written many of this nature. nice poem
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Date: 9/12/2010 1:41:00 PM
wow, a well understood deepness, it's hard to keep it together when you know your trying, deep write, enjoyed the read today...P.D.
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Date: 9/12/2010 8:01:00 AM
I like this very poinent. very well penned.
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Date: 9/12/2010 2:03:00 AM
Good portrayal of many a marriage.
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Date: 9/11/2010 10:08:00 PM
Now if my mother read this she would know that she needs to leave my step dad. this is very beautiful. even though im only 14. i under stand some part of love i think? but anyways, come check out my poems and comment on what you think. love always -angel4eva23
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