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Marooned

Manic waves sunk my boat,
marvel how I could float,
made it to an island,
man there had drinking stand,
mirage I was thinking,
many swigs lemonade,
marooned coconut shade.





4-19-17

Copyright © Cheryl Hoffman | Year Posted 2017

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May 1, 2017 at 7:35 AM

Imaginative and fun! Congratulations on your win Cheryl! :-)

May 1, 2017 at 8:21 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Mark!~Che :)

April 28, 2017 at 8:42 PM

A creative title to a mini story. I like the mirage scene. Congrats on your 2nd place win, Cheryl! Blessings, Kim

April 29, 2017 at 8:10 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and placing me as one of the winners Kim; always a very nice surprise! Blessings back~Che :)

April 25, 2017 at 7:27 AM

Ohh...a delicious poem, mirage or not! Love the story! Congrats, Cheryl!

April 25, 2017 at 7:42 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Kim; placement was nice surprise! Glad you enjoyed~Che :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 23, 2017 at 2:09 PM

- A great poem on the letter "M", Cheryl :) - Congratulations on your winning poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

April 23, 2017 at 6:58 PM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Anne-Lise; placement was a very nice surprise! hugs~Che :)

April 23, 2017 at 8:29 AM

Congrats on your win Cheryl

April 23, 2017 at 8:31 AM

OOOPS! That reply was meant for Agnes Joseph! Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Joseph~appreciate it!~Che :)

April 23, 2017 at 8:30 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Agnes; placement is always a very nice surprise! Me too (about the drinking stand)!!~Che :)

April 23, 2017 at 7:32 AM

That was fun, and you even made it rhyme! I hope if I am ever marooned, it will be on an island with a drink stand. Congrats on your win, Cheryl.

April 23, 2017 at 8:32 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Agnes; placement is always a very nice surprise! Me too (about the drinking stand)!!~Che :)

April 20, 2017 at 8:20 AM

A lovely verse Cheryl..

April 20, 2017 at 9:07 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Joseph!~Che :)

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