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Marooned

Manic waves sunk my boat, marvel how I could float, made it to an island, man there had drinking stand, mirage I was thinking, many swigs lemonade, marooned coconut shade. 4-19-17

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Mark Martin

Date: 5/1/2017 7:35:00 AM

Imaginative and fun! Congratulations on your win Cheryl! :-)

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 5/1/2017 8:21:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Mark!~Che :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/28/2017 8:42:00 PM

A creative title to a mini story. I like the mirage scene. Congrats on your 2nd place win, Cheryl! Blessings, Kim

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 4/29/2017 8:10:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and placing me as one of the winners Kim; always a very nice surprise! Blessings back~Che :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/25/2017 7:27:00 AM

Ohh...a delicious poem, mirage or not! Love the story! Congrats, Cheryl!

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 4/25/2017 7:42:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Kim; placement was nice surprise! Glad you enjoyed~Che :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/23/2017 2:09:00 PM

- A great poem on the letter "M", Cheryl :) - Congratulations on your winning poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 4/23/2017 6:58:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Anne-Lise; placement was a very nice surprise! hugs~Che :)

Joseph May

Date: 4/23/2017 8:29:00 AM

Congrats on your win Cheryl

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 4/23/2017 8:31:00 AM

OOOPS! That reply was meant for Agnes Joseph! Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Joseph~appreciate it!~Che :)

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 4/23/2017 8:30:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Agnes; placement is always a very nice surprise! Me too (about the drinking stand)!!~Che :)

Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/23/2017 7:32:00 AM

That was fun, and you even made it rhyme! I hope if I am ever marooned, it will be on an island with a drink stand. Congrats on your win, Cheryl.

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 4/23/2017 8:32:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Agnes; placement is always a very nice surprise! Me too (about the drinking stand)!!~Che :)

Joseph May

Date: 4/20/2017 8:20:00 AM

A lovely verse Cheryl..

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 4/20/2017 9:07:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Joseph!~Che :)