Marmalade Street

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On a street of mellow autumn, gold leaves have turned deep orange As harvest season offers vibrant hues, and cold that makes you cringe And wild, bitter orange sunsets, are caught between plummy days

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Michael Tor

Date: 10/18/2022 9:46:00 PM

Love your imagery and cold temps to follow Evelyn. wonderfully written...

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/19/2022 9:30:00 AM

Thank you, Michael. Have a blessed day.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/15/2022 7:50:00 PM

Beautifully framed, Evelyn. (And you're so right about that cold that makes one cringe too). Here's to marmalade time! ~ Gershon

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/15/2022 8:22:00 PM

Thank you for the joy of your positive comment, Gershon. :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/15/2022 7:21:00 PM

Great lines you composed, Evelyn. Bright words, add a splash of beauty. Additionally, the form that you used, Sijo, is one that I have never attempted before. I'm going to give it a go. Blessings dear friend.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/15/2022 8:23:00 PM

I am new to this form, myself, but I am loving it. Thank you for your kind words. :)