Evelyn Judy Buehler Poet Sijo

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Marmalade Street

On a street of mellow autumn, gold leaves have turned deep orange
As harvest season offers vibrant hues, and cold that makes you cringe
And wild, bitter orange sunsets, are caught between plummy days

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Michael Tor October 18, 2022 at 9:46 PM Love your imagery and cold temps to follow Evelyn. wonderfully written... Evelyn Judy Buehler October 19, 2022 at 9:30 AM Thank you, Michael. Have a blessed day.

Gershon Wolf October 15, 2022 at 7:50 PM Beautifully framed, Evelyn. (And you're so right about that cold that makes one cringe too). Here's to marmalade time! ~ Gershon Evelyn Judy Buehler October 15, 2022 at 8:22 PM Thank you for the joy of your positive comment, Gershon. :)

Sotto Poet October 15, 2022 at 7:21 PM Great lines you composed, Evelyn. Bright words, add a splash of beauty. Additionally, the form that you used, Sijo, is one that I have never attempted before. I'm going to give it a go. Blessings dear friend. Evelyn Judy Buehler October 15, 2022 at 8:23 PM I am new to this form, myself, but I am loving it. Thank you for your kind words. :)