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Marley's Ghost Revisited

If it isn't my old friend Ebenezer,
why you ugly grizzled geezer!
Have some tea (or soup) of barley,
This is your pal, Jacob Marley.
You needn't be so ghostly white.
There is no reason for your fright.
You've been reading evil books.
That explains your worried looks.
You won't hear rattling chains or moans.
Your business practices, I condone.
Money's good everywhere, even heaven's gate.
You don't need to fear your fate.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodrigues Avatar
January 18, 2025 at 10:43 AM
Enjoyed your remix! Great first line, and then the term of endearment, comfort, and advice - naughty or nice.
Crandall Avatar
January 18, 2025 at 2:25 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed it, Kim. It seems like Scrooge is always having such a hard time, I thought I'd lighten up on him a bit :-))
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