Maritime Metallic Mind


The cobalt mind of ancient mariner of the seven seas,
the surfing sailor tosses on the waves of youthful life,
rolls on the curled crests with the splintered moon,
drawn into dark agony troughs of the drowned stars,
spread pearls of joy on shore embroidering exuberance.

Crushed sands sculpt the trail of the seaward footprints,
designed by the crumbled contours of transient decay.
Time arrow points to the turquoise terrain ethereal,
away from the wistful wilderness abandoned, 
where the chasm stratifies the collapsed hopes undying.

The weed-webbed wasteland defined deep within,
piles up the shipwrecked splinters of life unlived.
Withering garden garners tinny bleakness, yet shining,
as the path paved outside the obscure familiarity fence 
waits to be walked by the mesmerized wanderer 
to the marvelous meadow of tantalizing tomorrow.

The invented alchemic aptitude of the mystic memory
makes glittering gold on the rusted crust of the ruins. 
Marigold blooms on scrap heap with steadfast sanguinity 
in Midas touched shipwreck junkyard of the metallic mind.

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Date: 4/29/2024 1:04:00 PM
Dear Subimal, I am ever amazed by your lush creative pen. Your stellar use of language, alliteration and color in your exceptional imagery challenges my intellect and enchants my imagination. Simply stunning! Congratulations for your win in Tom's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/5/2024 11:01:00 PM
Thank you, Susan for your encouraging comments and appreciation. I am humbled.
Date: 4/28/2024 1:00:00 PM
Subhimal or Roy, whatever your first name is, you are sooooo talented. Where you come up with your eclectic ideas for the themed contests is anyone's guess. You have an endlessly creative mind. Awesome alliteration and imagery. Well done
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Date: 4/28/2024 10:42:00 PM
My first name is Subimal. Thank you, Tom for the placement, and for your gracious comments.
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