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Show Don't Tell, Tell Don't Show Poetry    Contest Sponsored by Dilly Dally   THIRD PLACE  6/6/23   

Maritime Limbo

in stagnant water aesthetic ecstasy sinks~ engulphed by a lake planks in protrusion brooding clouds enshroud a pier~ silver lining plush
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Kavanagh  Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 12:29 PM
Aesthetic ecstasy sinks in stagnant water, doesn’t it just Anaya, excellent wording and contrast shown here, congrats on your placement, it was a great contest to take part in, cheers David
Anaya Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 12:39 PM
A toughie, Sam Kauffman got it. Good 'ol abstract beauty. Thank you, David!
Buehler Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 11:13 AM
What a magnificent poem! Congratulations on your win, Anaya. hugs :)
Anaya Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 12:18 PM
Thank you, Evelyn! xhugs to you
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 4:57 AM
Gorgeous piece Anaya. xomo
Anaya Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 9:09 AM
Thank you, MO! X
Gorelick Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 4:10 PM
An artfully nuanced brooding yet hopeful, mesmerizing. Best to you! Robert
Anaya Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 9:10 AM
Thank you, Robert!
Kauffman Avatar
June 6, 2023 at 11:25 AM
Wonderfully written Anaya! Your examples scream of impending environmental changes without a sermon. So well done - so beautifully crafted! It would be hard to miss the meaning. Truly this captures the spirit of show, don't tell. Best wishes for the contest. I think you have a winner! Blessings!
Anaya Avatar
June 6, 2023 at 3:05 PM
Thank you, Sam! I've seen many winners out there, DD should have a hardest time choosing. G'd Day!
Buhagiar Avatar
June 6, 2023 at 9:18 AM
great contrast.
Anaya Avatar
June 6, 2023 at 9:25 AM
Thank you, Victor! I'm hoping this is what DD was going for.
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