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Marionette

...............child's dancer ..................................tripped .......into an Odilon Redon.......... ..................................painting because she wanted to live...... in someone else's dream.....

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/15/2016 1:23:00 PM

Deborah Callahan,,, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. ~LINDA~

Skat A

Date: 9/6/2015 1:32:00 PM

Deborah, Enjoyed stopping by to read your poem today. Luv **SKAT**

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/22/2011 10:20:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Deborah. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/19/2011 12:22:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. enjoy the site and its many features as u continue to share words with luv..

Nick Bagnall

Date: 8/18/2011 8:46:00 AM

Though you stray from the hard and fast sylable count I feel you have captured the spirit of the Haiku in this piece. I had to look Odilon up wikipieida said "French symbolist painter and etcher. He foreshadowed the surrealists in his paintings of fantastic dream images ", which fits the poem perfectly, very well don - enjoyed.