Notes About The Poem

For Brian Strand's the 'No 1312 ' Poetry Contest

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Marine Life Footles

Hero of Marine World

Super
Grouper

The Disabled One

The shrimp -
A gimp

Electrocuted

Haddock
Had shock

When Sea Runs Dry

Salmon
Famine

Her Musical Fish

Faye’s carp
Plays harp

Great News

Found ‘yer
Flounder

Fish Caregiver

Caring
Herring

Because They Deserve It

Harass
The Bass

A clammy Make-over
More glam
For clam

You Just Missed Him

Gone clam 
On tram
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Horne Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 6:30 AM
Ha ha ha, love 'em - especially harrass the bass
Warlov Avatar
May 27, 2024 at 11:48 PM
Looks to me like An Ocean Commotion or you just like playing with your food.
Wolf Avatar
May 27, 2024 at 12:16 PM
'Harass the bass' does it for me. Terrific footle!!! :) Gershon
Beaufort Avatar
May 27, 2024 at 12:11 PM
Andrea, this are all quite fresh and funny!! A lot of fun really!
Kendrick Avatar
May 26, 2024 at 4:02 PM
Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Creative Footles. Sara K
Kitchin Avatar
May 25, 2024 at 2:38 PM
Andrea, these are cute and well done!
Anaya Avatar
May 25, 2024 at 12:59 PM
These are great footles, my favorite is Found ‘yer Flounder! You were always the Queen of Footles-Andrea.
George Avatar
May 25, 2024 at 4:01 AM
Nice alliteration and ryhme. The sea is a mother to many, they suffer in her misery too. Great one Andrea.
Empress Avatar
May 25, 2024 at 3:16 AM
You have a way with creatively weaving rhymes sweet andrea! I absolutely love this! Sea is my favorite place ever and to read marine footles is beyond soul warming for me! You made me smile with some words too! How clever you are! Queen of footles. You will remain! Best wishes for the contest
Buhagiar Avatar
May 25, 2024 at 3:09 AM
Delightful rhymes and great contrasts. Hugs.
One Avatar
May 24, 2024 at 12:02 PM
Nicely done Andrea..
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