Marine Life Footles

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For Brian Strand's the 'No 1312 ' Poetry Contest

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Hero of Marine World Super Grouper The Disabled One The shrimp - A gimp Electrocuted Haddock Had shock When Sea Runs Dry Salmon Famine Her Musical Fish Faye’s carp Plays harp Great News Found ‘yer Flounder Fish Caregiver Caring Herring Because They Deserve It Harass The Bass A clammy Make-over More glam For clam You Just Missed Him Gone clam On tram

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Jack Horne

Date: 5/28/2024 6:30:00 AM

Ha ha ha, love 'em - especially harrass the bass

Robert Warlov

Date: 5/27/2024 11:48:00 PM

Looks to me like An Ocean Commotion or you just like playing with your food.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/27/2024 12:16:00 PM

'Harass the bass' does it for me. Terrific footle!!! :) Gershon

Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/27/2024 12:11:00 PM

Andrea, this are all quite fresh and funny!! A lot of fun really!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/26/2024 4:02:00 PM

Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Creative Footles. Sara K

Tania Kitchin

Date: 5/25/2024 2:38:00 PM

Andrea, these are cute and well done!

I Am Anaya

Date: 5/25/2024 12:59:00 PM

These are great footles, my favorite is Found ‘yer Flounder! You were always the Queen of Footles-Andrea.

Tonye George

Date: 5/25/2024 4:01:00 AM

Nice alliteration and ryhme. The sea is a mother to many, they suffer in her misery too. Great one Andrea.

Ink Empress

Date: 5/25/2024 3:16:00 AM

You have a way with creatively weaving rhymes sweet andrea! I absolutely love this! Sea is my favorite place ever and to read marine footles is beyond soul warming for me! You made me smile with some words too! How clever you are! Queen of footles. You will remain! Best wishes for the contest