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For Brian Strand's the 'No 1312 ' Poetry Contest

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Hero of Marine World

Super
Grouper

The Disabled One

The shrimp -
A gimp

Electrocuted

Haddock
Had shock

When Sea Runs Dry

Salmon
Famine

Her Musical Fish

Faye’s carp
Plays harp

Great News

Found ‘yer
Flounder

Fish Caregiver

Caring
Herring

Because They Deserve It

Harass
The Bass

A clammy Make-over
More glam
For clam

You Just Missed Him

Gone clam 
On tram

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Date: 5/28/2024 6:30:00 AM
Ha ha ha, love 'em - especially harrass the bass
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Date: 5/27/2024 11:48:00 PM
Looks to me like An Ocean Commotion or you just like playing with your food.
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Date: 5/27/2024 12:16:00 PM
'Harass the bass' does it for me. Terrific footle!!! :) Gershon
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Date: 5/27/2024 12:11:00 PM
Andrea, this are all quite fresh and funny!! A lot of fun really!
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Date: 5/26/2024 4:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Creative Footles. Sara K
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Date: 5/25/2024 2:38:00 PM
Andrea, these are cute and well done!
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Date: 5/25/2024 12:59:00 PM
These are great footles, my favorite is Found ‘yer Flounder! You were always the Queen of Footles-Andrea.
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Date: 5/25/2024 4:01:00 AM
Nice alliteration and ryhme. The sea is a mother to many, they suffer in her misery too. Great one Andrea.
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Date: 5/25/2024 3:16:00 AM
You have a way with creatively weaving rhymes sweet andrea! I absolutely love this! Sea is my favorite place ever and to read marine footles is beyond soul warming for me! You made me smile with some words too! How clever you are! Queen of footles. You will remain! Best wishes for the contest
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Date: 5/25/2024 3:09:00 AM
Delightful rhymes and great contrasts. Hugs.
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Date: 5/24/2024 12:02:00 PM
Nicely done Andrea..
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