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Marina Melody Memories

                   



              San Francisco Jazz Afternoons





Carries me back to those special Sunday afternoons with you.
The striped awning Jazz cafe, our very unique,ibeloved rendezvous.


The smell of the glorious, scents of the Pacific Ocean,
Those brown flirtatious huge eyes,lashes, my West Coast sensation!

My diamond engagement ring glittered like rainbow butterfly wings.
Memories of Coltrane, Davis, music that made you my heart laugh and sing.

San Francisco, always the beguiling, mystical jewel of my heart. 
Everyday people who loved peace,jazz music, discourse, finest coffee and art.

You later, bought a fresh, intoxicating gardenia for my ebony bobbed hair.
Do you recall later, Union Street in The City’s, moist, foggy, sensuous air?

The spiritual City, was indeed our forever souls', sparking, galaxy prime, 
We were both as daystars, walking its winding streets, so totally divine!


                                            1/9/2024
                                    
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Goldsmith Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 12:05 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful memories write/good picture. Great memories are the best kind to have... Have great day.....................
Romios Avatar
January 12, 2024 at 1:09 PM
My years there,were the best in my life without question! I grew up in my soul met outstamding friends, extraordinary beauty every day. You have no idea what it’s like to go on your roof at night and see the Golden Gate Bridge. Awesome structure.. and to go to sleep at night and you hear the foghorns …is better than any musical! I made many great friends in SF. I hope one day, the city can be returned to sanity. Again! I only know it as an Angel to my Spirit. Merci, Paula….Pangie
Elliott Avatar
January 10, 2024 at 3:17 PM
Oh, how lovely and precious your San Francisco memories, Pangie. Just so beauteous. You have a sharp mind. Have a restful evening. ~
Romios Avatar
January 12, 2024 at 12:58 PM
Hi Regina…i still can see The City as it was years ago. Pristine abd safe, civilized and harmonious. It was the closest thing I can think of next to heaven, once Mayor Mosonewas assasinates, a darkness fell over the city,i will go nowhere near it now! I left before the big Quake.no city will ever be so mellow and genteel. I even met Ronald Reagan on the street and Dick Van Dyle and spoke with each. Years later with john Denver! Merci, Pangie
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 10, 2024 at 11:20 AM
Hello Panagikota, those are great memories you have. Hugs. /D xxxarlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 10:21 AM
Hello Panagiota, Yes I am still here. These Hugs. are pleasant memories you have. Hugs. xxx/Darlene/
Romios Avatar
January 10, 2024 at 11:26 AM
Long time since I have seen you! Overjoyed you are here and liked the memories in San Francisco. They are etched on my heart. Thank you, dear Darlene! Your friend, Pangie
Roper Avatar
January 10, 2024 at 8:24 AM
So divine .. memories to cherish. Hugs my friend
Romios Avatar
January 10, 2024 at 9:08 AM
My friend for so long, Eve! This seems like only yesterday! But I can relive things vivivdly. I think thats a great gifi. I prefer past Realities ro fictional stuff.. and my life has been anything but boring, so why not right about it?. Angie thanks youm sweet Eve. Pangie
Buhagiar Avatar
January 10, 2024 at 1:48 AM
Massive description that makes you a great poet.
Romios Avatar
January 10, 2024 at 3:06 AM
Victor, even though I have written many poems i never consider myself great….however, I am greatly honored. Coming from a poet of your caliber. It iinspires me to pen finer poetry.. thank you. Blessings, Pangie
Wolf Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 7:36 PM
You certainly have a love affair with life, my friend. It's expressed soooooooo well in this one. ~ Gershon
Romios Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 7:44 PM
Dear Gershon. That is one of the most lovely things anyone has ever said to me. And I think you were right in your starement, We all have a passion or something. But you’re right is exactly what you said. I won’t add anything on because it’ will ruin in. I don’t want to even be known as a great poet, or even a good poet.. just as someone who said what you said. Bas NoAch, Pangie
Rodgers Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 6:05 PM
Dear Panagiota, Your poem encapsulates the essence of shared afternoons in San Francisco with such vivid detail and emotion. The way you paint the scenes with the jazz cafe's striped awning and the scents of the Pacific Ocean instantly transports the reader to those cherished moments. Your poem is a breathtaking journey through love, music, and the enchantment of San Francisco. Thank you for sharing these profound and heartfelt memories. Blessings, Daniel
Romios Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 6:51 PM
Dear Daniel, your comment humbles me and made me read the poem again. I thought, surely he’s not talking about my poem but indeed you were.!They were mystical dayss and I carry them within a crystal globe in my heart! How happy you made me. Thank you.for being so specific! Pangie
Hinshaw Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 4:24 PM
Pangie, you are the primo writer of romantic verse! Enjoyed! Bob H
Romios Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 4:36 PM
We all seem to have our specialties, don’t we! Yours are Limericks and Western Poetry which are fabulous. Appreciate your time, Bob, hug Jeff, your faithful pet for me. Pangie
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