Marilyn

Mystical apparition resting in luminance,

Your name hath altered my passion.

Timidly on now,

I go.

 

Fervently,

I walk alone.

Calling your name in shadows,

so I will atone.

 

Oh, it is naught,

for I have bought

a brighter day.

Always shall I stay,

to say:

 

I shall hold,

like a thousand bold

soldiers. Just to look

inside those emerald eyes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Agustin Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 8:33 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 24, 2016 at 7:53 PM
Paul, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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July 27, 2015 at 3:29 PM
PAUL, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~
Sweetheart Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 8:21 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope u enjoy the site as u share words with luv..
Brown Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 5:03 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Paul. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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