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MARIA

It broke her heart when Franco died he’d been her soul mate wed over fifty years he’d been her life For her Franco she had a ritual lit a candle every night so he would know how much she missed him Today would be a special day she felt it when she closed her eyes wouldn’t be lighting any candle she took her one last deep breath set down the path to join her Franco posted on October 20, 2019

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Date: 10/23/2019 2:10:00 PM
Loving couple when alive who find each other after death - a very moving write Line. I understand that Maira felt this would be a very special day! Well penned Line, Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 10/23/2019 3:25:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Jennifer.
Date: 10/23/2019 8:05:00 AM
Love this one!
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Date: 10/23/2019 8:55:00 AM
Thank you so much, Panagiota. Most appreciated.
Date: 10/21/2019 5:04:00 PM
A wonderful love story I enjoyed very much thanks. Love it! A fav!
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Date: 10/21/2019 7:55:00 PM
Thank you so much, Timothy. Most appreciated.
Date: 10/21/2019 5:00:00 PM
A sad but true affair...gripping verse Line...sending poetic love...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 10/21/2019 7:56:00 PM
Thanks, ^WW^ Most appreciated.
Date: 10/20/2019 11:58:00 PM
Sad, but lovely, Line <3
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Date: 10/21/2019 3:36:00 PM
Hello There, thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 10/20/2019 11:05:00 PM
Very sad, Line, it does hurt deep when you lose your soul mate.
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Date: 10/20/2019 11:19:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Eve.
Date: 10/20/2019 9:45:00 PM
Line, This is a touching poem. Somewhere a candle is lit for Franco & Maria. -Richard
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Date: 10/20/2019 10:48:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Richard.
Date: 10/20/2019 10:10:00 AM
beautiful in its sadness...i know some that have died of a broken heart after losing their soul mate... Nice Line :)
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Date: 10/20/2019 10:20:00 AM
Absolutely, Sandra. So sad and true. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment.