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Maria

It broke her heart
when Franco died
he’d been her soul mate
wed over fifty years
he’d been her life

For her Franco
she had a ritual
lit a candle every night
so he would know
how much she missed him

Today would be a special day
she felt it when she closed her eyes
wouldn’t be lighting any candle
she took her one last breath
set down the path to join her Franco



AP: 2nd place 2021, Honorable Mention 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Proxenos Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 2:10 PM
Loving couple when alive who find each other after death - a very moving write Line. I understand that Maira felt this would be a very special day! Well penned Line, Hugs, Jennifer.
Gauthier Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 3:25 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Jennifer.
Romios Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 8:05 AM
Love this one!
Gauthier Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 8:55 AM
Thank you so much, Panagiota. Most appreciated.
Mcguire Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 5:04 PM
A wonderful love story I enjoyed very much thanks. Love it! A fav!
Gauthier Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 7:55 PM
Thank you so much, Timothy. Most appreciated.
Warrior Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 5:00 PM
A sad but true affair...gripping verse Line...sending poetic love...^WW^ :o)
Gauthier Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 7:56 PM
Thanks, ^WW^ Most appreciated.
There Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 11:58 PM
Sad, but lovely, Line <3
Gauthier Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 3:36 PM
Hello There, thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Roper Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 11:05 PM
Very sad, Line, it does hurt deep when you lose your soul mate.
Gauthier Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 11:19 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Eve.
Theraven Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 9:45 PM
Line, This is a touching poem. Somewhere a candle is lit for Franco & Maria. -Richard
Gauthier Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 10:48 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Richard.
Adams Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 10:10 AM
beautiful in its sadness...i know some that have died of a broken heart after losing their soul mate... Nice Line :)
Gauthier Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 10:20 AM
Absolutely, Sandra. So sad and true. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment.
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