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March Surprises




                      waterfalls gurgle
               to hanging ice formations
                     surprises in March

Heidi Sands

3/22/24

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Kelly Deschler

April 6, 2024 at 6:14 PM

A great poem, Heidi ... I can see it all so clearly ... March can be quite an unpredictable month, indeed :)

Heidi Sands

April 7, 2024 at 4:06 AM

Thank you Kelly. I appreciate your kind comment :)

Jennifer Proxenos

April 6, 2024 at 10:56 AM

Hi Heidi, I think more people should immigrate to sunny South Africa, although we have had hotter days this Autumn than we did in Summer, i do like your HAIKU very much and it is typical of what climate change is altering weather patterns all over the world. Hope you are keeping well, Kindest regards, Jennifer.

Heidi Sands

April 6, 2024 at 12:01 PM

Thank you very much Jennifer. The weather here has certainly been wild recently. We also will be having a total solar eclipse here Monday. It is nice to see you. I hope you are keeping well too :)

Gershon Wolf

April 3, 2024 at 7:46 PM

I like this image-laden haiku, Heidi... How about this for an April 3 vision in Chicago today: 'Frosted flakes of snow for breakfast.' Ugh. Typical first week of April around these parts. ~ gw

Heidi Sands

April 5, 2024 at 11:49 AM

I like that Gershon. Frosted Flakes. Thanks for the smile. We have over a foot of heavy snow with many trees down. Let's hope April gets better :)

Paula Goldsmith

April 3, 2024 at 8:04 AM

What a fun March Haiku write. I love this month/time of the year. Have a wonderful day writing away.................

Heidi Sands

April 3, 2024 at 12:49 PM

Thank you Paula. There are some beautiful waterfalls in this area. I hope you have a wonderful day writing away too :)

Hilda Greenhough

March 27, 2024 at 10:02 PM

A very touching haiku written in the classic Japanese style. You transported me to a beautiful winter place. (Next time remind me to bring a coat)

Heidi Sands

March 28, 2024 at 5:44 AM

Thank you very much Hilda. Ok I will :)

Joe Maverick

March 27, 2024 at 3:11 PM

You really got on the March, with this haiku Heidi..'

Heidi Sands

March 27, 2024 at 3:22 PM

Hi Joe. Thank you for your visit and comment. I appreciate it. I hope you have a nice evening :)

Marugu Mo

March 26, 2024 at 3:55 AM

A haiku in its truest form!

Heidi Sands

March 26, 2024 at 4:01 AM

Thank you. I appreciate your comment :)

Joanna Daniel

March 25, 2024 at 2:20 AM

Lovely haiku, Heidi:)

Heidi Sands

March 25, 2024 at 5:34 AM

Thank you Joanna :)

Christina Bowring

March 24, 2024 at 1:02 AM

A beautiful haiku dear Heidi where you have captured such a vivid scene. March certainly does conjure up surprises - the beauty of nature and its elements. Really enjoyed the artistic poem. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you :)

Heidi Sands

March 24, 2024 at 5:07 AM

Thank you Christina. Yes March does surprise. Winter weather is fully back here Thank you for the kind comment :)

Jerry Brotherton

March 23, 2024 at 3:42 PM

Maybe not the kind of surprise we like to see in March, but a wonderful haiku.

Heidi Sands

March 24, 2024 at 5:06 AM

You are right Jerry. We just got dumped with over a foot of snow. Thank you for your comment :)

Joseph May

March 23, 2024 at 7:48 AM

An icy surprise in Spring, Lovely Haiku Heidi

Heidi Sands

March 23, 2024 at 8:00 AM

Yes and now the forecasted snow piling up. Thank you. I hope you have a nice day:)

Vijay Pandit

March 23, 2024 at 6:44 AM

For sure the weather is quite moody at the moment. Hanging ice--moment beautifully captured, Heidi--soon it will be gone.

Heidi Sands

March 23, 2024 at 7:27 AM

Moody for sure Vijay. Snowing hard. 12 to 18 expected here, then more snow and freezing rain on top of that tonight. I hope your day is going ok thank you for your comment, my friend:)