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March middleness is much too fleet, coming in on a creature’s feet. Is it the lion which brings it on pouncing with a roar on my lawn? Or does it come with a lamb’s bleat? Each March must swiftly meet defeat when April brings her rains and heat. There’s little time to think upon March middleness! Spring Equinox is such a treat, for blossoms bloom which smell so sweet, then March’s middle time is gone by then - its time is brief as dawn! We long for spring yet barely greet March middleness. April 18, 2017 for Dave Will's March Middleness Poetry Contest The computer I am at right now does not allow me to scroll down through categories. That is why I gave the label "art" to this. April 18, 2017

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Date: 5/7/2017 3:36:00 PM
Many congrats Andrea I didn't have a clue what to write and you nailed it - love this time of year:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/7/2017 11:22:00 AM
Dropping back with my Congrats
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Date: 4/29/2017 6:05:00 PM
Well done Andrea..love the form..hugs
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Date: 4/23/2017 10:04:00 AM
Amazing how you tackle such difficult themes, Andrea:) I have no idea what this contest means!! yours should do well, a winner to me:)
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Date: 4/21/2017 11:52:00 AM
Oh such a different poem, March Middleness swiftly passes, thanks for your poem we now can make it a point to ponder upon.
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Date: 4/20/2017 2:51:00 AM
Wonderful poetic language in conveying 'March', with 'Spring's' imagery simply gorgeous. Fabulous write, stunning photo, a joy to read. lynnxxx
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Date: 4/19/2017 4:12:00 PM
You can label it whatever you want Andrea...this is great!! So creative :) I always enjoy your reads from anywhere :)
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Date: 4/19/2017 10:27:00 AM
Well, the label art is gone so I guess you corrected it when you got to a different computer..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like winning material to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara
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Date: 4/19/2017 7:11:00 AM
ah andrea, excellent rondeau! the line "pouncing with a roar on my lawn" gives me a shiver - great personification!
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Date: 4/18/2017 8:22:00 PM
That wayward season of spring often catching us unaware. A great entry for his contest Andrea! 7; )
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Date: 4/18/2017 7:53:00 PM
Hi Andrea, This was well excuted. It like a winner to me. I love springtime. I hope you had a great Easter. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/18/2017 7:47:00 PM
Beautiful, Andrea, hope you had a nice Easter. Hugs
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Date: 4/18/2017 5:14:00 PM
Andrea this is great. A winner for sure. Very cleverly done and love the pic. Excellent. From 1 to 7 this is a 10 God Bless and thanks so much for the much appreciated input on my "And God Gave Him A dog." JB
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Date: 4/18/2017 5:14:00 PM
Sad really that we can't keep March around longer. I love the Spring, green showing through the ground, flowers starting up, my azaleas beginning to bloom. The robins and birds showing up at the feeders. Such a lovely time of the year.
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