March in Minnesota

The air feels different 
Forgiving, even kind!

Chicadees & Robins flitting 
From bushes to trees 
Recon flights scouting 
Proper nesting sites

A Bald Eagle flew overhead 
This morning as I travelled
The motorway 
Good luck!

A muddy penny, unloved, castaway
Zinc replaced copper 
Time replaced need

Escape from Winter's icy womb!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Radice Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 1:19 AM
Against the backdrop of a mid-western state (that’s been in the news over here in UK quite a lot recently) and in among the great nature descriptions I picked up the theme of hope / change / moving on. Right or wrong I really enjoyed the read. Cheers - Gary
Goff Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 2:58 PM
Thanks for stopping by Gary! glad you enjoyed my poem!
Maverick Avatar
March 24, 2026 at 12:56 PM
Keep going Jimbo, travel well and live Even better.' I feel the lightness in your Words.'
Goff Avatar
March 30, 2026 at 12:11 PM
Hi Joe! Same to you!
Daniels Avatar
March 20, 2026 at 4:39 PM
Beautiful detailed insightful poem about a walk. I like how you’ve woven nature into the man-made re : coin. Lucky you for spotting a bald Eagle. It is rare that they fly over motorways. ThkU for sharing.
Goff Avatar
March 20, 2026 at 8:53 PM
Thanks for stopping by Ghairo! I had fun inking it!
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