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March Choka

Super Moon presides Laconic application Devouring life and soul They say it’s a curse Shivers replace the heart beat Unwelcome changes imposed The mindset for one Howling beasts inside contrite Affection withdrawn

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/22/2011 1:01:00 PM

You know, David, looking at that moon was a wonderful experience, but I did have some thoughts about the "howling beasts" that emerge with the full moon. Cool choka! Glad to see you posting again and thanks for stopping by. Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/22/2011 11:54:00 AM

Interesting ending David, quite enjoyed this one tonight :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/22/2011 5:38:00 AM

Parallel to emotional influx David.. as the devouring of life and soul.. powerful line .. not a curse but rather a state of mind my friend... positive vibes luv.. that is the key ..so nice to hear from u David... more frequently please..luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/21/2011 11:04:00 PM

I take it that it's not bringing much good, this super moon? Maybe it had something to do with Japan? LUna's ways have real merit!!

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 3/21/2011 8:20:00 PM

You came up with quite an interesting Choka with the Super Moon, David! Great write actually, striking in a cold way. I'm feeling you!