March

white whale
swallows orange dragon…
    broken kite string
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kendrick Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 4:08 PM
Cute one ...Got a chuckle..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Callus Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 1:14 PM
You have created a striking image, here, David; I too see that white whale as a big cloud. Regards // paul
Dietrich Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 3:54 PM
oh wow, I'm seeing the white whale as a cloud! I love this!!
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