Lin Lane Poet Acrostic

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Marbles In the Sky

Magnificent forms in a world that once was black
Are bright shining orbs. There's nothing they lack
Revealing to me that life holds abundant treasure
Beyond comprehension, outdistancing all measure
Lending me chiseled vision, as through a cat's eye
Exquisite beauty is found in the clearest night sky
Stars are wondrous gifts; a fact no one can belie

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Anne-Lise Andresen June 4, 2017 at 7:13 AM - Beautiful poem, Lin :) - Acrostic poems is not easy, well done - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ilene Bauer May 28, 2017 at 2:27 PM nicely done, lin! a beautifully formed acrostic... Lin Lane June 4, 2017 at 10:16 AM Thanks so very much Ilene.

Tim Smith May 28, 2017 at 10:28 AM I thought you found my marbles...lol...seriously Lin you turned out a seamless acrostic...now if these clouds would scatter I could have a gaze. Arthur Vaso May 28, 2017 at 9:25 PM A few may be missing their marbles, you are not one of them! :) Lin Lane May 28, 2017 at 2:02 PM Your marbles were never lost, Tim. Starry starry nights are the writing tablets of a romanctic...you know all about that. Thanks so much.

Daniel Turner May 28, 2017 at 8:08 AM Would you like to go star gazing with me, sometime? I love your poem. Lin:) Lin Lane May 28, 2017 at 1:14 PM Why thank you for asking, Danny. I would love to, and many thanks for liking this one.

Jan Allison May 28, 2017 at 8:01 AM what a lovely rhyming acrostic Lin and the picture is gorgeous!!:-) I love looking up at the sky and seeing the stars on a crystal clear night:-) hugs Jan xx Lin Lane May 28, 2017 at 1:14 PM Thank you for the kudos, Jan. I can't see the stars so well here, near the city, but when I lived in Colorado there were so many brilliant lights in the sky.