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Marbles In the Sky

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Magnificent forms in a world that once was black Are bright shining orbs. There's nothing they lack Revealing to me that life holds abundant treasure Beyond comprehension, outdistancing all measure Lending me chiseled vision, as through a cat's eye Exquisite beauty is found in the clearest night sky Stars are wondrous gifts; a fact no one can belie

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/4/2017 7:13:00 AM

- Beautiful poem, Lin :) - Acrostic poems is not easy, well done - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/28/2017 9:24:00 PM

So beautiful, this reminds me a book! :)

Lin Lane
Date: 6/4/2017 10:17:00 AM

Thanks very much, Arthur.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/28/2017 2:27:00 PM

nicely done, lin! a beautifully formed acrostic...

Lin Lane
Date: 6/4/2017 10:16:00 AM

Thanks so very much Ilene.

Tim Smith

Date: 5/28/2017 10:28:00 AM

I thought you found my marbles...lol...seriously Lin you turned out a seamless acrostic...now if these clouds would scatter I could have a gaze.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/28/2017 9:25:00 PM

A few may be missing their marbles, you are not one of them! :)

Lin Lane
Date: 5/28/2017 2:02:00 PM

Your marbles were never lost, Tim. Starry starry nights are the writing tablets of a romanctic...you know all about that. Thanks so much.

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/28/2017 8:08:00 AM

Would you like to go star gazing with me, sometime? I love your poem. Lin:)

Lin Lane
Date: 5/28/2017 1:14:00 PM

Why thank you for asking, Danny. I would love to, and many thanks for liking this one.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/28/2017 8:01:00 AM

what a lovely rhyming acrostic Lin and the picture is gorgeous!!:-) I love looking up at the sky and seeing the stars on a crystal clear night:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 5/28/2017 1:14:00 PM

Thank you for the kudos, Jan. I can't see the stars so well here, near the city, but when I lived in Colorado there were so many brilliant lights in the sky.