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Yellow asters along the fence Gone their lush perfume… once intense Tousled after a last hello Many, many long years ago Naïve boy-girl flames of sundown Each quiver reflecting nights’ crown Cheek-kiss…pink bliss through seasons---Oh Many, many long years ago! Not even frost harmed wake of blade As if thrill ‘s claim sprung…unafraid When time was young, a world aglow Many, many long years ago. Precious and rare, a moment kept An infatuation quite swept By fancy. I adored him so— Many, many long years ago! Dear Heart’s Writing Challenge 1, July 2019 – Repeating Refrain Poetry Contest 7/15/2019 ~Revised

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Date: 7/27/2019 8:40:00 PM
Such a delightful poem, Nette: It flows perfectly. I could feel the wistful nostalgia in the refrain and the imagery. ’when time was young, a world aglow.’ Love, SuZ
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Date: 7/19/2019 1:59:00 PM
- Congratulations on your lovely poem, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/19/2019 8:58:00 AM
Hi Nette, a really cute write from a cute, pretty and clever poetess - your support from the beginning is so appreciated dear friend and congrats on your win - you deserve to win them all! Hugs and blessings. Jennifer.
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Date: 7/19/2019 8:53:00 AM
Nette, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge with this delightful poem, I just love your writing and the image is so sweet !
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Date: 7/19/2019 1:16:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 7/18/2019 1:26:00 PM
ahhh, this write truly warmed mine heart dear poet ! o! and congratulations on the win i see! Have a wonderful Summer Nette! Much love, james
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Date: 7/17/2019 9:53:00 PM
Really enjoyed the reading. Congrats.
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Date: 7/17/2019 6:03:00 PM
Lovely write. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/17/2019 5:15:00 PM
What a sweet poem Nette. Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/17/2019 9:09:00 AM
Congrats, this is such a sweet poem ..childhood crush ..you make us feel the fantasy of remembering them with your vivid words
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Date: 7/17/2019 8:35:00 AM
Hi nette: I imagine some people had experienced that moment in time. You have epitomized that moment with your delightful poem.
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Date: 7/16/2019 9:30:00 PM
Dropping back with my Congrats on your top win nette
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Date: 7/16/2019 8:28:00 PM
A lovely image to start off your rhyme! Congratulations, Nette!
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Date: 7/16/2019 8:17:00 PM
Nette congrats on your win!;)
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Date: 7/16/2019 7:26:00 PM
It has been too long! Reading this makes that especially true. I adore this, each line gave me a poetry rush. Be well and blessed and may I return soon ... CayCay
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Date: 7/16/2019 2:07:00 PM
Great take on the contest Nette..
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Date: 7/16/2019 9:48:00 AM
Wonderful write Nette. It has gem written all over it. Excellent! Good luck in the contest. hugs // Charlie :)
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Date: 7/16/2019 9:39:00 AM
Very innocent and free...a wonderful feeling to this write...
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Date: 7/16/2019 7:15:00 AM
Wonderful write Nette..best wishes..
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Date: 7/16/2019 6:22:00 AM
This is a favorite for me Nette. There is something so nostalgic and heart warming in this poem. It has your signature of good all over it. Hope your doing well, sending you a big hug xo
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Date: 7/16/2019 12:02:00 AM
Adorable. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 7/15/2019 9:36:00 PM
One would expect nothing less than an exceptional poem from your pen! Beautifully written Nette :) hugs
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Date: 7/15/2019 6:59:00 PM
Well wriiten Nette. I enjoyed this. So Sweet :)
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Date: 7/15/2019 4:05:00 PM
Happy fond memories Nette. Good luck. Tom
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