Bl Devnath Poet Senryu

Many Kinds of Hot

many kinds of hot
                                  one kind makes body sure drought 
                                     cold drink helps like draught

                                          dangerous mind's hot
                                  when someone or something hits
                                      hot words drink makes fool

                                           another kind's that
                                   when night star glitters in heart 
                                          everyone knows well

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Harry Horsman June 4, 2015 at 2:46 PM My kind too! Bl...excellent renderings in such short verse. Bl Devnath June 4, 2015 at 2:53 PM Thanks a lot my very lovely friend for your wonderful comment of appreciation. Loved always,bl

Judy Konos June 4, 2015 at 9:54 AM And there is yet another kind of HOT...this poem is very HOT....enjoyed much! Thanks Bl Devnath June 4, 2015 at 10:04 AM Lol! it's a funny poem my lovely friend. Thanks a lot for your beautiful comment. Loved always,bl