Notes About The Poem

Mantra for the living

time is a lane on the freeway
keep your eye on the destination
do not get distracted from your ambition
the only frivolities worthwhile are relationships
and even then ~ choose wisely



AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 11:19 AM
Great message and image, Line. Thanks for my recent win in your contest. It means a lot to me since so few people read that poem of mine.
Gauthier Avatar
June 20, 2025 at 9:09 PM
Thanks, Andrea ~ I guess it's summer and people have less time to read and leave comments...
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