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MANTLE OF WHITE

FROM MY ROOFTOP GARDEN, 25 NOVEMBER 2016, MY PICTURE, (c)

Mantle of White

Giggling snowflakes fall

Winter's mantle of white weave

Hibernation's glee!






(c) Demetrios Trifiatis
     25 November 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kannan Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 11:07 PM
Wow...sweet haiku... A 7...
Trifiatis Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 8:43 AM
How sweet from you dear, Supraja! You so kind! Thank you!
Wolf Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 11:01 PM
Another great haiku, Demetrios. Great imagery in such few words.
Trifiatis Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 8:43 AM
Rick my friend, thank you or your precious visit and comment!
Gupta Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 4:40 AM
How beautifully speaks nature ... and how brilliant is the language maker ...
Trifiatis Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 7:08 AM
You so gracious my friend, Probir! Thank you so very much!
Allison Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 3:47 AM
oh so beautiful but those giggling snowflakes can stay away from me lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Allison Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 11:32 AM
Oh please do lol I love to see it on Christmas cards but our little Island it just grinds to a halt when snow falls and of course as you know I suffer from the cold:-( hugs jan xx
Trifiatis Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 7:07 AM
I will do my best to keep those "monster snowflakes" away from you dear, Jan! Thank you for your kind visit and comment! Hugs xx
Andresen Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 2:57 AM
- Sounds and written beautiful, but cold :) - Luckily we did not have snow yet - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 7:06 AM
So good to see you again my dearest Anne-Lise! You were missed! Thank you for your lovely visit and comment!
Godwin Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 2:20 AM
Perfect count and content for me, I lit up reading the first line - effective and enjoyable Haiku ... You be well ... CayCay
Trifiatis Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 5:37 AM
You so kind my dear, CayCay! Thank you very much for taking the time to visit and comment!
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