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Man's Evil Painted Red

Three-hundred bodies shrouded in the snow - stiff symbols of man's evil painted red. Did horror freeze on the faces also of women, men and kids who simply fled? They ran from men outnumbering each one of them and who with mountain guns shot dead the half of them who had no chance to run! Imagine fleeing, filled with so much dread. Two miles some women ran to get away. Unarmed and innocent, they must have pled when found, but troopers shot them anyway. At one dead woman's breast, a child still fed! Some boys who hid were told they would be spared if they'd come forth, but they were circled by a number of cruel soldiers when they dared to show themselves. Those beasts wished them to die. The boys were butchered; then they lay in mud along with their good fathers once so strong, Ravines and hills were running with their blood, and vanished now would be their Ghost Dance song. This happened in my homeland of the free but not so brave, yet twenty medals went to men who took part in that killing spree (said honor given by the government). That cold bleak morning, few of them survived. For white folks, though, a great new century was just ahead, but all the dreams had died for those Lacotas killed at Wounded Knee. For Anthony Biaanco's Guns Contest

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Date: 5/18/2021 10:57:00 AM
Andrea, you have this incredible talent to create beautiful and poignant lines through the use of rhyme. I love the lines, for example, “Did horror freeze on the faces also, of women, men and kids who simply fled?”- beautiful!
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Date: 5/11/2021 3:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a story/write. Have a blessed day with your win......................
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Date: 5/11/2021 11:36:00 AM
Not a story I knew, Andrea, but I do now. Well written depiction and well worthy of your win. Congrats. Terry
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Date: 5/11/2021 6:06:00 PM
now you know this story. They made a movie about it and I read about it online. It was so horrible how they treated those poor people
Date: 5/11/2021 8:20:00 AM
Horrific. Yet so well written! Congrats on your win, Andrea!
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Date: 5/11/2021 7:06:00 AM
I truly loved this poem and what a sad subject, congratulations on the win. Best Terry.
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Date: 5/11/2021 5:53:00 AM
WOW. Incredible write. So glad it was a winner. God bless you always sweet friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 5/10/2021 8:40:00 PM
Reminding the history! Congratulations!
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Date: 10/9/2016 10:05:00 PM
Oh when was this contest judged. I forgot all about it! Well done Andrea. :) Indeed history hold so many horrors which weighs far heavier than human's good deed! :(
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Date: 10/9/2016 3:05:00 AM
It's really heart breaking to even know about such cruelty taking places every now and then all over the World. All we can do is hope for the best and spread as much good we can. Bravo for addressing such an issue with your powerful writing. Congratulations, Andrea.
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Date: 10/8/2016 6:31:00 PM
This seems like it is about the massacre at wounded knee of the Lakota. Well written, Congratulations. Yes, I see the last line. This was a terrible evil, I cried watching the movie.
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Date: 10/8/2016 11:15:00 AM
Well done Andrea, congratulations...
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Date: 10/8/2016 7:33:00 AM
I apologize to everyone that this took so long...I have no excuse but that I had lost my muse and it was a pain to read or write for so long! Please forgive me! Once again you are amazing Thank you so much and congratulations Andrea
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Date: 7/6/2016 12:47:00 PM
Horrible about the Indians. My wife still sends them money and they return nice gifts. Love, daver
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Date: 7/4/2016 6:26:00 AM
Oh Andrea, this poem clutches the heart until it bleeds for the torture that they endured. I can see this coming in first place my friend. You have outdone yourself on this one.A magnificent piece! 7 ; )
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Date: 7/4/2016 2:46:00 AM
Sounds terrible especially the heartlessness of killing young children...The last line of the third stanza is so heart rending:( This poem somehow reminded me of the Jallianwala Bagh massacre:(:(
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Date: 7/4/2016 12:37:00 AM
Excellent. A very moving poem. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 7/3/2016 4:21:00 PM
You tell it well Andrea, so much culture throughout the ages has been destroyed or tried to be through despicable acts.
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Date: 7/3/2016 6:40:00 AM
Very good Andrea, some clever enjambments kept the flow tight, and a good story abstractly told, well done, ian
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Date: 7/2/2016 6:52:00 PM
Andrea, I concur, living in Minnesota, I have researched the Native American uprising that led to the largest mass hanging in USA in Mankato, have written here about it, keep the flame alive! Thank you!
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Date: 7/2/2016 6:43:00 PM
Awesome write, that little bit of Indian blood in me cries for those that were killed like that.
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Date: 7/2/2016 5:51:00 PM
this is awesome, my friend - so sad but beautifully written
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Date: 7/2/2016 5:08:00 PM
I Buried My Heart at Wounded Knee, one of the more heart breaking books I've read
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Date: 7/2/2016 2:53:00 PM
Hi Andrea, You have penned such a horrible part of history. I could sense the evil in every line. Your incredible pen caused me see those innocent people running for their lives. What is the honor in killing innocent people? This should do good in the contest-7:-)Alexis
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Date: 7/2/2016 2:06:00 PM
It's hard to believe that a "civilized" people committed such horrendous atrocities. Great write on a tragic subject, Andrea. Evil was a definite participant in that event.
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Date: 7/2/2016 12:56:00 PM
- They let their victims die a horrible way - Blood, violence and death... it is not surprising that the Man's evil painted red - Very impressive write, Andrea - Happy weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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