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Mankinds BS

I tire of the all the B.S

Thats spews from the mouths of mankind

Spoken with false sincerity

Good intentions undermined


No decency , no conscience

Souls darkened by deceit

Void of compassion and kindness

Hearts of solid concrete


Good, kind ,caring humans

Are the saving grace

To still have belief in mankind

To keep and maintain faith

Copyright © Deb M | Year Posted 2025

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Joe Maverick Date: 3/7/2025 11:36:00 AM I shall comment Deb, I dont know what good it Can do.? Maybe some might start to think? I certainly hope so.' Well done poem btw' Login to Reply Deb M Date: 3/9/2025 1:44:00 AM Thankyou Joe….l appreciate your comment greatly! Cheers….Debx

John Read Date: 3/6/2025 8:58:00 AM Things have certainly deteriorated Deb. xx Login to Reply Deb M Date: 3/9/2025 1:54:00 AM Thanks John! Debx

Mike Gentile Date: 3/5/2025 4:25:00 AM I know that there are still kind and decent folks among us Deb but sometimes, it's just so hard to see and hear them but I must remain faithful! Your write is spot on!! Well done! Happy Wednesday Deb xxoo Login to Reply Deb M Date: 3/9/2025 1:55:00 AM Thankyou Mike….much appreciated my friend! Debx

Jerry Brotherton Date: 3/4/2025 11:21:00 AM This one perfectly captures the anger and frustration of these modern times, my friend. Login to Reply Deb M Date: 3/9/2025 1:55:00 AM Thankyou brother Jerry! Debx

Bj Legros Kelley Date: 3/3/2025 11:36:00 PM You penned this so well, it is a horrible reality, and yet, there are loving hearts like yours and others on this site, and our families. I turned off the news, and that has helped me somewhat to focus on light. Sadly, we live in tumultuous times, but then again...as I read history and think, hm! When weren't we? If not us, there was always some, as you so well expressed, BS going on. Cheer up, to see you upset is like a cloud over sunshine. Just know dear Deb, you are sunshine. Be blessed <3 Login to Reply Deb M Date: 3/10/2025 3:19:00 AM BJ…..What a beautiful comment…. from my heart l truly thankyou my friend! Debx

Gordon Mcconnell Date: 3/3/2025 12:09:00 PM Nice penning Deb with good rhyme and flow with nice imagery too. Blessings always,Gordon Login to Reply Deb M Date: 3/9/2025 5:39:00 AM Thankyou Gordon…so lovely to see you! Debx

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 3/3/2025 10:06:00 AM Dear Deb, Wow, you captured the frustration of seeing the falsehoods and lack of sincerity around us, yet it also holds onto the hope for goodness in humanity. I liked the contrast between the deceitful and the truly compassionate really strikes a chord. Beautifully written and so meaningful! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Login to Reply Deb M Date: 3/10/2025 3:16:00 AM Thankyou Daniel for another lovely comment! Debx

Terry Flood Date: 3/2/2025 4:08:00 PM Fortunately, Deb, just one of the latter is worth fifty of the former. Enjoyed your observations; alas I must dash… I’ve got an interview with that nice Donald Trump. Login to Reply Deb M Date: 3/10/2025 3:15:00 AM You make me laugh my F.F….THANKYOU….Debx

Janice Canerdy Date: 3/2/2025 5:42:00 AM SO TRUE, Deb. I think you have well described the condition of most hearts. Janice Login to Reply Deb M Date: 3/10/2025 3:15:00 AM Thanks Janice….Debx

Jan Allison Date: 3/1/2025 2:13:00 PM should be poem of the year Deb - just look at the world around us:-( hugs jan xx Login to Reply Deb M Date: 3/1/2025 6:36:00 PM Exactly Jan....so much mayhem! Thankyou my friend....Debx

Tom Cunningham Date: 3/1/2025 12:34:00 PM Sadly there's a lot of them undesirable folks around Deb, best ignored.. Tom Login to Reply Deb M Date: 3/1/2025 11:19:00 PM Hey Tom….its easy to ignore individuals but hard to ignore the state of the world created by these people. Good people restore ones faith! Thanks my friend! Debx

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/1/2025 12:23:00 PM - The day we give up, everything will go "dark"... there are compassionate and good people too, Deb - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs Login to Reply Deb M Date: 3/1/2025 11:20:00 PM Exactly Sunshine….good humans won't give up just keep striving for the betterment of good! Thankyou sweet Sunshine! Debx

Lin Lane Date: 3/1/2025 11:49:00 AM You've got a grip on the wiles of mankind, Deb. The greedy need an attitude adjustment. Login to Reply Deb M Date: 3/1/2025 11:24:00 PM I think all good people have a a grip on the wiles of mankind lovely Lin…..it can bring you down so much at times but as long as we rise above the B.S and continue to believe! Thankyou…..Debx