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Mankind In Dreamland

Pestered and pursued by unknown foes A topsy turvy land where snakes could have horns and cows can have fangs! Nightmares in which the day's stallions make mountains out of molehills. A chance to witness greek mythology like creatures for real since dreamland's a place for the unreal, the surreal. There are hair- raising scary dreams Beset with horrified yet silent screams. For us to wake up pinching ourselves and sigh with relief to see neither tigers or elves. All in all, dreamland's fascination for extraordinary exaggeration and tall tale imagination Where myth and legend come to life An amalgam of fiction and real strife Where assorted monsters of the mind reign supreme in the REM sleep of our kind Yet on the other hand the sweet sweet dreams where fantasies form mirages bordered by fanciful seams where castles in the air float gently down to earth only to shoot back up nowhere from the awakened one's berth. Dreamland's a great place for a princess and fairytale fair for daydreams extend into midnight and linger on there. Yet a quote I took to heart and here would love to share 'that if your sweet dreams don't come true, don't you fret coz atleast your nightmares didn't come true either!'' That oughtta console all and sundry Yeah go on heave relief's phew sigh! (linked to the contest page painting by Deshpande)

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Date: 4/30/2014 7:29:00 PM
pure imagibation,kammonpour.. sweet congrats on your shining win!.. huggs
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Date: 4/30/2014 2:13:00 AM
Great write on Rock My world contest. Congrats on the win. Kammonpuri
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Date: 4/29/2014 8:10:00 PM
S Z K.,
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Date: 4/29/2014 8:11:00 PM
WOW, I see why DG loved this one... i enjoyed it way before.. A xool rocking poem... Congrats on D G.'s contest.... Linda
Date: 11/6/2013 9:10:00 PM
Congratulations..... Love ~~SKAT~~
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Date: 11/5/2013 11:27:00 PM
S z k., , Congratulations on your win... awesome Teenager Entertainment poem.... always~ LINDA
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Date: 11/2/2013 3:31:00 PM
congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/4/2013 11:45:00 AM
Really liked your Greek mythology reference; I'm a huge Greek mythology buff and have written several pieces inspired by it. This poem is a little long for my personal taste; sometimes an editing eye can help with fluidity, Overall, good piece. Kudos, and thanks for sharing :)
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Date: 10/4/2013 11:46:00 AM
I also very much enjoyed the "dreaminess" of this poem :)
Date: 9/15/2013 1:51:00 AM
love it, my fav is ,,,,,All in all, dreamland's fascination for extraordinary exaggeration and tall tale imagination
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Date: 9/8/2013 11:05:00 AM
Hi, S Z.K, i like the dream land better than some realities I know.. a good free rhyming verse... xox..Linda
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Date: 9/2/2013 8:59:00 AM
This reminds me of a fanasy life in space nicely done poet
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Date: 8/20/2013 12:39:00 PM
HI DID NOT UNDERSTAND YOUR COMENT ON MY REMS WRITE DAVIDSCOTT
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Date: 8/18/2013 2:37:00 AM
love it :)
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Date: 8/17/2013 2:38:00 PM
Very well done. Reminds me of my own dreams...
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Date: 8/17/2013 10:16:00 AM
Yes, life is a sort of dream and people dreams a better world. Your poetry is excellent, different from any other, unique. I appreciate it much. My compliments
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Date: 8/17/2013 6:42:00 AM
Great bits and pieces, made this piece awesome. I enjoyed the flow.
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Date: 8/17/2013 6:31:00 AM
this piece made me rhink of some of my own nightmares throughout the years...enjoyed the way you out this together, the images life-like as in a dream...good piece :)
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Date: 8/17/2013 6:10:00 AM
Wow! excellent poems with splendid imagery. I enjoy reading it. I like the writing style of the broken lines...it sort a accentuate the inner meaning of the poem. Thank you for visiting my work.
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Date: 8/17/2013 4:18:00 AM
Dear, nice way of fluency summed up here, please elucidate in verse form, dont ever break the words in lines form, keep them collective.
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Date: 8/17/2013 3:06:00 AM
I love the flow...sweet and beautiful
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