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Manifesto

Written: December 27, 2024 For Contest Sponsored by: Hilo Poet _________________________________ At dawn of a place cocooned once in avarice silver-haired savvy savor sweetness serene symphony of silliness... Each echo is adorned in mirrors of moments whilom Still, the illness remains a threat Silhouettes shaped by streetlight gloom. Luigi Mangione delivers an arcane calix crestfallen at awe-in junction of cathartic pain, mark of jeopardy, spirits who stumbled amid intricate twists of a complex web where wellness waltzs whimsically as demon sibylline, errorless, and suave flimsy fusion of flux and mellifluous maunder. Let us linger in lurched odds of yeender, covenant, of concept, and courtesy firm freedom fetching fairness for all. seeking serenity in the scripts of statutes. Yet we wonder, wrapped in a  whirlwind of wearying red tape frailty of fitness, a puzzling paradox where reviews reverberate as an epiphany as doctors and designs decide the merit yesterday's valiant victors,  confront morrow's troubling disregard. Oh, the convoluted challenges of continuing! a clock clicks constantly in the foreground each tick teases the transience of time whilst systems swirl swiftly shift and shape to the tempo of transition, a thrum of turmoil In a society that shuns, or selects to shun, figures featuring fervent faces, fates at stake. We stand strong, side by side, in such a struggle amid a wave of apathy and regulations the price of wellness is presented plainly a burden of broad-based break bears our back yet, we discover dynamism in togetherness a steadfast strength of souls have survived storms in chuckles of cherished seniors, once more liberated. As we ascend from the abyssal katabatic, let us linger on the lessons learned a frailty of life, a grace of guardianship and let Luigi’s manifesto heard an odyssey a clarion call for a fairer future where the weak are warmly welcomed and the whispers of a wretched world weave a wondrous wave of wellness.

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Date: 1/24/2025 11:47:00 AM
Wow. Amazing alliteration, especially there at the end. Congrats on your placement
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Date: 1/5/2025 7:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Date: 1/4/2025 9:53:00 PM
Mahalo, Lasaad, for your righteous words of truths, and my compliments on your worthy placement in my contest. Aloha~William
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Date: 1/5/2025 1:29:00 PM
Thank you so much for hosting the contest, and for my placement. Dear William always wishing you the best and happy new year to you and yours
Date: 12/28/2024 11:26:00 PM
Ah dr sotto, this is absolutely stunning how youv woven words throughout in such a profound manner on so many aspects of life and what breathes within and around us everyday! Your wisdom and understanding of life is evident through this write , woven with such sumptuous diction, seamless alliterations and excellent metaphors! Always good to see you write and post and this is no exception! I especially loved the lines "Yet we wonder, wrapped in a whirlwind of wearying—“ just brilliant! Absolute pleasur reading this gem! Best wishes! Sending you light always
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Date: 12/28/2024 7:32:00 PM
a powerful work conveying the need to address health concerns and allowing justice to succeed...best new year wishes, sotto!
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Date: 12/28/2024 1:00:00 PM
Poems like this is the reason I’m on poetrysoup… to explore and appreciate the poetic greatness of some of the world’s best poets. Thank you for crafting this masterpiece, your words touch my heart and soul.
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Date: 12/28/2024 12:27:00 PM
- There is often talk about the "basic conditions of life" in the media world or everyday life: hope, responsibility, love, grief, forgiveness, reconciliation, vulnerability, pain, loneliness, addiction and mortality ... there is really a lot to dwell on ... with a tiring bureaucracy while the systems whirl rapidly change - A excellet poem, Las :) - I wish you a Happy New Year :) - hugs
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Date: 12/28/2024 12:23:00 PM
Your poem is filled with strength for the struggle of the weak and filled with hope as well. I am finding strength as I read fellow poets today, I am not even going to try to force my pen, I resign it to the muse but will rest in the beauty strength and uplifting of my friends, as you. I love this, I am stirred that there is hope in the world above the apathy of red tape :) You lift my heart Sotto. I am glad I ventured back today!
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Date: 12/28/2024 6:23:00 AM
Your poem beautifully explores themes of vulnerability, societal structures, and the complexity of human existence, drawing on vivid imagery and evocative language. The opening lines, "At dawn of a place cocooned once in avarice," immediately set a tone of introspection, suggesting a world once driven by greed but now in a state of reflection and transformation. It is a poignant meditation on the fragility of life, the complexities of health and societal systems, and the resilience found in unity and shared struggle.
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