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12/17/2024 for Manifesto Poetry Contest sponsored by Hilo Poet

Manifesto

Government, corporations, military,
Healthcare, and the insurance you carry - 
if you fight them in court, you have my respect.
Mega-systems don't care about lives they've wrecked,
and the b******ds always win.

In the personal life of your own creation,
you can tune into a loving vibration. 
You can change this sad saying to a bad cliche, 
or if it's true, you can make it easier anyway,
when the b******ds always win.

Fighting the machine is enough to overwhelm, 
but it's not right to knock out the man at the helm.
If you can cause change, you're a better man than I.
After the struggles I've had, I don't even try,
and the b******ds always win.

The almighty dollar is all that matters,
without consideration for lives it shatters.
People in the system, ain't more than a cog.
To get someone to care, you must buy a dog,
and the b******ds always win.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Evans Avatar
January 6, 2025 at 10:36 AM
Congratulations, David! Yes, it all boils down to money, profit for the corporation and bonus for the higher ranks.
Crandall Avatar
January 6, 2025 at 8:28 PM
Thanks, Mariline! That seems to be how things go - discouraging.
mysore Avatar
January 5, 2025 at 7:19 AM
Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
Crandall Avatar
January 5, 2025 at 8:11 AM
Thanks Thriveni!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 4, 2025 at 11:28 PM
Mahalo, David, for your participation with your undeniable rhyming format style, and my compliments for your winning entry. Aloha~William
Crandall Avatar
January 5, 2025 at 8:09 AM
Aloha William, good luck in what you're going through!
Greenhough Avatar
December 18, 2024 at 9:15 PM
They don't always win. But they do get retribution. Money creates monsters, yet we all need it.
Crandall Avatar
December 18, 2024 at 9:55 PM
This was a hard one. I have to admit that I really don't understand the world, but I thought I'd take a stab at it. I do know that money is pretty danged important in everything though.
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