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Manic No More

Manic No More As I soar around the room I like it up here As I fly and I fly and I fly and I fly I see her down there Weeping and suffering Please let me take away her pain She should be happy not sad. I go down to let her know I can help She doesn’t see me she doesn’t care As I soar around the room I like it up here As I fly and I fly and I fly and I fly Is that me I wonder? As I look down below I come crashing to the floor Manic no more

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Date: 1/16/2018 8:29:00 AM
Oh my goodness! All sorts of connotations come to mind here, Patricia...I do have to say though I rather enjoyed this little poem of yours. My best regards. :) john
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Patricia Leduc
Date: 1/16/2018 11:01:00 AM
John..thank you for your encouragement.

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