Mania

Thoughts
tumble
unfettered,
ravaging my
mind.

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22 October 2017

For the "Mania" contest, sponsored by Lewis Raynes.

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Paul Callus

November 17, 2018 at 5:37 PM

Your words trip through my mind, John, like the endless thoughts which assail us continuously. Regards // paul

John Michaels

November 19, 2018 at 11:30 AM

Ooh, you've found one of my older ones! Thanks your insightful and supportive comments, Paul. Kind regards, John.

Kim Rodrigues

October 28, 2017 at 4:50 PM

Great brevity poem!

John Michaels

October 30, 2017 at 5:22 PM

Thanks for your comments, Kim. Regards, John.

Susan Ashley

October 24, 2017 at 9:06 PM

John, such a fantastic write in so few carefully chosen words. Awesome and enjoyed! Good luck in the contest!!

John Michaels

October 28, 2017 at 5:41 AM

Very kind of you to say, Susan. The theme is open to so many interpretations and this is what felt right for me. Many thanks, John.

Andrea Dietrich

October 23, 2017 at 8:40 PM

Very cool way to describe it, John. I enjoyed this one.

John Michaels

October 24, 2017 at 2:14 AM

Thanks, Andrea! Glad you liked it! All the best, John.

Eve Roper

October 23, 2017 at 1:57 PM

Good , John, I'm not sure to even try for this contest.. Eve ~`*

John Michaels

October 24, 2017 at 2:14 AM

Thanks, Eve. If you're inspired, you should definitely give it a go. Regards, John.

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