Mania

Thoughts tumble unfettered, ravaging my mind. --------------- 22 October 2017 For the "Mania" contest, sponsored by Lewis Raynes.

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Date: 11/17/2018 5:37:00 PM

Your words trip through my mind, John, like the endless thoughts which assail us continuously. Regards // paul

John Michaels
Date: 11/19/2018 11:30:00 AM

Ooh, you've found one of my older ones! Thanks your insightful and supportive comments, Paul. Kind regards, John.

Date: 10/28/2017 4:50:00 PM

Great brevity poem!

John Michaels
Date: 10/30/2017 5:22:00 PM

Thanks for your comments, Kim. Regards, John.

Date: 10/24/2017 9:06:00 PM

John, such a fantastic write in so few carefully chosen words. Awesome and enjoyed! Good luck in the contest!!

John Michaels
Date: 10/28/2017 5:41:00 AM

Very kind of you to say, Susan. The theme is open to so many interpretations and this is what felt right for me. Many thanks, John.

Date: 10/23/2017 8:40:00 PM

Very cool way to describe it, John. I enjoyed this one.

John Michaels
Date: 10/24/2017 2:14:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea! Glad you liked it! All the best, John.

Date: 10/23/2017 1:57:00 PM

Good , John, I'm not sure to even try for this contest.. Eve ~`*

John Michaels
Date: 10/24/2017 2:14:00 AM

Thanks, Eve. If you're inspired, you should definitely give it a go. Regards, John.