Mango Spring

Tantalizing green was the color of spring green mangoes.
Sitting high, calling out to me again from the windows!
Pray a strong wind comes around
Lays them down on the ground
How I want to taste them, but “You'll fall sick” ,Ma echoes!

Date written:04/05/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A  Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 1:45 AM
Sara, good for a first post. SKAT
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May 19, 2016 at 6:32 AM
Hi Sara. Congrats for having your piece featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!! ;-)
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May 19, 2016 at 8:42 AM
Thanks,yes I was surprised:)
Inman Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 10:37 AM
Cute first post.
Chansarkar Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 8:42 AM
Thanks James!
Dietrich Avatar
April 19, 2016 at 3:50 PM
oh how cute, and the mom yelling out that you will fall sick. Funny!
Chansarkar Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 8:42 AM
Thanks Andrea!
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April 6, 2016 at 5:41 AM
Hi Sara, Nice first post. Welcome to poetry soup.Wish a successful journey ahead..........hugs
Chansarkar Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 2:35 PM
Thanks!
Babbit Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 2:35 PM
Nicely done, welcome to the soup.
Chansarkar Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 2:36 PM
Thanks for reading my poem!
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April 5, 2016 at 1:37 PM
Sara,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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April 14, 2016 at 2:37 PM
Thanks for reading my poem and the warm welcome!
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