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Mango

"Mom, this Mango is not
moist or as orange as
Michaels, it's yucky green
moldy, this is moldy."
"Mary, are you certain?"
"Maybe, let me look, oh;
mine's an Avocado!"

Copyright © Terry Miller | Year Posted 2023

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September 23, 2023 at 2:42 AM

Creative way to go with this winner. Congratulations on your work being on the winners' list. Sara

October 24, 2023 at 3:47 AM

Thank you Sara

September 20, 2023 at 11:40 PM

This was fun and creative , unique and well written Pleiades on mango. I love it. Congratulations

September 21, 2023 at 9:31 AM

Yes funny i never give up on these puzzling pleiades. Yours flow very well

September 21, 2023 at 9:14 AM

Thank you so much I have had fun with the Pleiades form, quite challenging.

September 20, 2023 at 4:36 PM

Congrats on your win with your surreptitious avocado tale, Terry

September 21, 2023 at 9:14 AM

Thank you Terry

September 20, 2023 at 5:28 AM

Nice twist at the end, Congrats on your win Terry

September 21, 2023 at 9:15 AM

Thank you Joseph

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 20, 2023 at 4:17 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the Pleiades 5 Poetry Contest, Terry :) -

September 21, 2023 at 9:15 AM

Thank you again, I appreciate it

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 18, 2023 at 7:44 AM

... a clever twist, Terry :) - GL in the contest :) -

September 20, 2023 at 3:09 AM

Thank you so much

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