Mango

"Mom, this Mango is not moist or as orange as Michaels, it's yucky green moldy, this is moldy." "Mary, are you certain?" "Maybe, let me look, oh; mine's an Avocado!"

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/23/2023 2:42:00 AM

Creative way to go with this winner. Congratulations on your work being on the winners' list. Sara

Terry Miller
Date: 10/24/2023 3:47:00 AM

Thank you Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 9/20/2023 11:40:00 PM

This was fun and creative , unique and well written Pleiades on mango. I love it. Congratulations

Ink Empress
Date: 9/21/2023 9:31:00 AM

Yes funny i never give up on these puzzling pleiades. Yours flow very well

Terry Miller
Date: 9/21/2023 9:14:00 AM

Thank you so much I have had fun with the Pleiades form, quite challenging.

Terry Flood

Date: 9/20/2023 4:36:00 PM

Congrats on your win with your surreptitious avocado tale, Terry

Terry Miller
Date: 9/21/2023 9:14:00 AM

Thank you Terry

Joseph May

Date: 9/20/2023 5:28:00 AM

Nice twist at the end, Congrats on your win Terry

Terry Miller
Date: 9/21/2023 9:15:00 AM

Thank you Joseph

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/20/2023 4:17:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the Pleiades 5 Poetry Contest, Terry :) -

Terry Miller
Date: 9/21/2023 9:15:00 AM

Thank you again, I appreciate it

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/18/2023 7:44:00 AM

... a clever twist, Terry :) - GL in the contest :) -

Terry Miller
Date: 9/20/2023 3:09:00 AM

Thank you so much