Man In the Cave




Bellicose grunts
and flatulent echoes
heard around a skull-lined Neanderthal fire
Misogynist going ons;
newly upright walking wrong,
behaving like apes
Dragging their women by the hair,
putting them in the cattle line
Perfect breeders are the ones who look fair — 
on a hunting trek, 
female children always get left behind
The women teaches the girls 
to gather the food, and pour the wine
As the man on the raised stone throne,
sits observing the ordered chaos within
Gross darkness is his bottomless pit friend
He loves the darkness of the cave,
cannibalistic deeds 
not seen in the light is what he craves
Feeding on the flesh of the fallen enemies,
a feast fit for a necromancer king
The man in the dark cave
wears the coveted ruler blood ring
It glows ruby red in the night
by the skull circle of fire
As dreadful gender misdeeds
transpires all around the cavern keep,
his scowl of approval
encourages the men wolf beasts
to continue to rape the female sheep
Then someone put some fire on a wooden limb,
and ventures out into the wilderness night
This pleases the man in the cave ... 
now he carries forth his darkness by light
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Michael Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 9:35 AM
Really good Freddie...darkness walking in light...
Lamoureux Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 1:17 PM
Whew, a disturbing piece that is not so different than man today. Humans have just gotten more sophisticated at hiding their depravity. Well done my friend.
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