Notes About The Poem

They say it's French

but it feels more Machismo to me.


You know, that firm lushness

creamy smooth smushiness

moist but not to much

to whet appetite


for more

avacado.

Man, I Gotta Learn To Read the Rules

They say it's French
but it feels more Machismo to me.

You know, that firm lushness
creamy smooth smushiness
moist but not too much
to whet appetite

for more
avocado.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Lane Avatar
October 22, 2011 at 7:25 AM
It was still good. You're back in the groove I see. Tony
Guy Avatar
October 22, 2011 at 6:56 AM
Nancy, i don't even know how to spell guacamole (OMG! I got it right!...1st try) but this "creamy smooth smushiness" just slips on the tongue. ;-)
A   Avatar
October 21, 2011 at 7:34 PM
hehhe love it,,.p.d.
Johnson Avatar
October 21, 2011 at 6:32 PM
This is a masterpiece!!!!!
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