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Man I Admire

I can see him from afar
Tall, Dark, and handsome
But when he smiles I can see his tartar

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Andrea Dietrich

October 7, 2013 at 6:57 PM

I came looking for some poem of yours to read but I just can't seem to find any new ones. I remember this one because it was so funny.

Honestly J.T.

October 2, 2012 at 10:59 PM

wow uhh you could send him some Crest whitening strips along with Orbit chewing gum. It may suffice - JH

Len Gasun

October 1, 2012 at 11:48 PM

ha ha ha... hilarious and awesome write my dear friend but I think you missed the contest! Congratulations still!!! love:) norie

Andrea Dietrich

October 1, 2012 at 4:13 PM

oh boy, what a dismay to see him smile. this was very interesting!!!

Doris Culverhouse

October 1, 2012 at 3:01 PM

so funny....gross! yuck mouth!

Bukang Liwayway

April 7, 2016 at 1:49 AM

hahaha thanks it makes you smile ;) good day

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 1, 2012 at 12:07 PM

Today is the start of a new month and a new week. I am reading what looks to be some exceptional writing today. So glad I was able to read yours Maria. Love, Carol