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Man I Admire

I can see him from afar Tall, Dark, and handsome But when he smiles I can see his tartar

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/7/2013 6:57:00 PM

I came looking for some poem of yours to read but I just can't seem to find any new ones. I remember this one because it was so funny.

Honestly J.T.

Date: 10/2/2012 10:59:00 PM

wow uhh you could send him some Crest whitening strips along with Orbit chewing gum. It may suffice - JH

Len Gasun

Date: 10/1/2012 11:48:00 PM

ha ha ha... hilarious and awesome write my dear friend but I think you missed the contest! Congratulations still!!! love:) norie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2012 4:13:00 PM

oh boy, what a dismay to see him smile. this was very interesting!!!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/1/2012 3:01:00 PM

so funny....gross! yuck mouth!

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 4/7/2016 1:49:00 AM

hahaha thanks it makes you smile ;) good day

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/1/2012 12:07:00 PM

Today is the start of a new month and a new week. I am reading what looks to be some exceptional writing today. So glad I was able to read yours Maria. Love, Carol

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/1/2012 11:39:00 AM

Beautiful from a distance .... lol ... Funny and well written Maria. oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 4/7/2016 1:48:00 AM

thanks Anne...Good day