Man and His Desires

A man was struggling
                             to swim out of the ocean,
                             the ocean of desire;
            ,                 he was close to the coast
                             and there he saw a man
                             waving at him and asking
                             at the top of his voice,
                             ' Hey man, you there,
                              can I help you, help you
                              to reach the coast safely,
,                              but then you will have to 
                              promise me you will give up
                              all desires in life, will you? 
                              o.k the man in distress said,
                              but then, 'I have a desire' , he replied,
                              to which the man on the  coast answered,
                              As I said before,'man you will have
                              to give up all desires, will you?
                              the man on the coast asked again,
                              he received no answer, and the
                             man in distress in the ocean
                             didn't  appear there afterward perhaps,
                             he preferred to drown in the
                             abyss of 'Desires' rather than
                             reaching the doors of Heaven
                             for the man on the coast was 
                             none other than the 'Lord God' Himself
                             And the human that he is, the
                             man in distress failed to see 'HIM'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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February 27, 2018 at 2:55 PM
Great analogy, very well written Vasudevan..
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February 27, 2018 at 3:41 PM
Thank you very much Silent one for those encouraging lines.
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