Get Your Premium Membership

Man

I see you I see you in the smoke thin air I see your hair fluffing in the wind You look so handsome The man who is so proud A lion in this animal kingdom Who is the leader of the pack Who speaks no nonsense And seeks no pretense Who cares about what others think What he can do for the good of the people I see your dreams and visions That you want to trump I see your unshaken beliefs Your foundation to the Father Who we all hold dear I see the love that speaks volume The passion smoldering in your eyes The fire that burns within The smoke that could start any fire The brilliance that you display The unaffected conviction that can overcome any resistance The challenge that you pose to others To conquer or be conquered God had made you like that The wind The song The air The life that blows Can you see?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/20/2014 2:25:00 PM
A beautiful poem! With love Maxima
Login to Reply
Harrell Avatar
Toquyen Harrell
Date: 4/20/2014 3:53:00 PM
Thanks, Stefan! Love ya.
Date: 4/20/2014 1:19:00 PM
Hi Toquyen, nice to know you: A beautiful poetic description of a take charge guy in real life who is blessed by God. My compliments!
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs