Man

I see you
I see you in the smoke thin air
I see your hair fluffing in the wind
You look so handsome
The man who is so proud
A lion in this animal kingdom
Who is the leader of the pack
Who speaks no nonsense
And seeks no pretense
Who cares about what others think
What he can do for the good of the people
I see your dreams and visions
That you want to trump
I see your unshaken beliefs
Your foundation to the Father
Who we all hold dear
I see the love that speaks volume
The passion smoldering in your eyes
The fire that burns within
The smoke that could start any fire
The brilliance that you display
The unaffected conviction that can overcome any resistance
The challenge that you pose to others
To conquer or be conquered
God had made you like that 
The wind
The song
The air
The life that blows
Can you see?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Maxima Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 2:25 PM
A beautiful poem! With love Maxima
Harrell Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 3:53 PM
Thanks, Stefan! Love ya.
Sergi Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 1:19 PM
Hi Toquyen, nice to know you: A beautiful poetic description of a take charge guy in real life who is blessed by God. My compliments!
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