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Man! I Love You!

what do u say to a man
a man thats been hurt
some what torn down
but didnt quite make it to the ground
what do you say
when you make a mistake
and in the eyes of another it may seem small
but in the eyes of that man
its the biggest mistake of all
yet that man has hurt you
broken u down mentally
physically
emotionally
hey but not spiritually
well atleast not all the way
and atleast not on this day
what can you say to him
he doesnt wanna hear how much you wanna hold him
squeeze him
kiss him
and love him
well maybe not kiss
but my point hasnt been missed
hes made of brick walls and unbreakable cement
stronger than the pyramids
and til this day they still stand
so wat of his pain and hurt
will it still stand or crumble like the dirt
and in the mean time where am i
in corners at night with alcohol beverages 
and tears flooding my eyes
where am i to go
what am i to do
when that man has me torn down
and this love for him wont let me loose...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/18/2009 4:18:00 AM
this poem spoke to me dearly..... i was once in a relationship w/ someone that torn me in half.......... i was going so crazy that i actually placed him before God.......... going through a divorce and it may seem rough, but hold your head high and continue to press on. NEVER ALLOW YOUR PAST TO OVERSHADOW THE BLESSINGS OF YOUR FUTURE.. ialthough i have never seen you or anything, i know that you are strong and beautiful. FAITH IS THE ONLY WEAPON YOU NEED. God bless and stay strong
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Date: 11/11/2009 4:10:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ancely. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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