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Man! I Love You!

what do u say to a man a man thats been hurt some what torn down but didnt quite make it to the ground what do you say when you make a mistake and in the eyes of another it may seem small but in the eyes of that man its the biggest mistake of all yet that man has hurt you broken u down mentally physically emotionally hey but not spiritually well atleast not all the way and atleast not on this day what can you say to him he doesnt wanna hear how much you wanna hold him squeeze him kiss him and love him well maybe not kiss but my point hasnt been missed hes made of brick walls and unbreakable cement stronger than the pyramids and til this day they still stand so wat of his pain and hurt will it still stand or crumble like the dirt and in the mean time where am i in corners at night with alcohol beverages and tears flooding my eyes where am i to go what am i to do when that man has me torn down and this love for him wont let me loose...

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Date: 11/18/2009 4:18:00 AM
this poem spoke to me dearly..... i was once in a relationship w/ someone that torn me in half.......... i was going so crazy that i actually placed him before God.......... going through a divorce and it may seem rough, but hold your head high and continue to press on. NEVER ALLOW YOUR PAST TO OVERSHADOW THE BLESSINGS OF YOUR FUTURE.. ialthough i have never seen you or anything, i know that you are strong and beautiful. FAITH IS THE ONLY WEAPON YOU NEED. God bless and stay strong
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Date: 11/11/2009 4:10:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ancely. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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