Mama's Tears

When Steffie died,
She lived on
as tears on Mama's cheeks.
The bright colored dresses
with delicate lace
and the dolls with button eyes
were put away
But, still Mama cried.
Why is death? 
she asked me,
And I tried to remove the tears,
But like hot metal
They were molded to her cheeks.
I couldn't answer her question
And I cried too
Because I didn't know.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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November 30, 2008 at 4:29 AM
Shelbia - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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November 11, 2008 at 9:13 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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November 1, 2008 at 4:44 PM
Shelbia - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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October 30, 2008 at 8:15 AM
Congrats on having your poetry featured - God Bless
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October 29, 2008 at 12:48 PM
A touching poem. And very best luck in the final round! ~ Carri
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October 28, 2008 at 9:27 AM
Congrats Shelbia, on "Mama's Tears" being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince
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October 28, 2008 at 7:29 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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October 27, 2008 at 3:57 PM
Congrats on your amazing poem making the semi-finals and best of luck in the finals!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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October 27, 2008 at 9:54 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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October 26, 2008 at 6:45 PM
Heartfelt poem. I particulary like lines 2 and 3. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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October 26, 2008 at 4:39 PM
Heartbreaking, beautiful. A powerful and tender poem. Congratulations on a well deserved featured write of the week. Love, Shar
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