Mama's Song

I wander through my journey, interspersed with joy and pain, always grateful 
Though not by choice, some days are somber; yet others follow with abundant joy
In my solitude, memories come alive with the recall of some old song from another time
When life was carefree in everyway! No worries and not one care!
First heard as a child; the title now lost to me, so I’ll call it "Mama’s Song"
It’d start off soft and slow; its rhythm smooth, graceful, incredibly beautiful!
Then lingering on my mind, gently reviving memories lost somewhere in yesterday
It’d calm my spirit, take me away- away from countless, mundane tasks
All necessary things, but they arrest my days, imposing, threatening, vying for attention

There’s a constant battle that rages within, and I often ask, “Should I lay down this burden  
of joyless pursuits which hinder valid expressions from my heart?  Should I?
And to what profit?  Surely monetary gain is a necessity, but at what cost to my spirit??
Were I guardian only to myself, I’d simply choose to live lean somewhere by the sea
I would cast my net for food, and barter for grain and herbs.  However, the compass is set
So, I escape in the melodies, with my eyes closed, and fly high, above this terrain
Sailing on the massive wings of a Condor, unafraid; over rugged pathways and
Jagged edges of mountains that rise above the seas, far away from this place of constant 
weariness, on my way to a place more tranquil, somewhere in yesterday
I hover over rivers that give life to green valleys below, quite an amazing view to see!
Like black velvet ribbons they meander through the changing landscape
At an angle they shimmer like fine crystal in the afternoon sun, and in one breath,
I am there! At Mama’s feet, studying her as she sews dresses for my sisters and me 
I watch, I listen to her, softly singing; feel her contentment and peace through the song
Never complaining, never too tired to go beyond the call, to love and care for family 
Teaching by example, using less words, her quiet spirit, ever steadfast, strong
Those times when I feel I can not go on, when afraid I'll falter, I still hear the the melody 
and "Mama's Song"!

Note:  For Mama - Thank you for putting us first! For the many lessons learned which we nowteach our children.  RIP w/Papa!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
September 13, 2010 at 1:23 PM
Not knowing your siblings, but reading this piece and gaining a glimpse of your mum. I see you in her Audrey, delightfully loving tribute >> James
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September 1, 2010 at 2:08 PM
This was from your heart cause the love you have for your mama is felt in these words.Absolutly beautiful.Thanks Audrey for the congrats on my win.Teresa
Rhinem Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 4:26 PM
~ Then it would be a song by a group called "U2" titled, "Its A Beautiful Day" ~ Again, "Beautiful Poem Dear; Magical & More; 'Very Precious!!!'" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You & Your Loves, Always & Forever,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Evening Dear Audrey Carey &, Stay As 'Beautiful & Bright, As You Soo Truly Are;'" Bye Dear Lady!:) ~
Rhinem Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 4:16 PM
Smile ~ I can only imagine dear, "How Very Beautiful 'Your Precious Mother' Must Have Been; If Merely But A Reflection of 'The Beautiful Daughter Which Molded Within Part Amid Her Soft & Lovely Hands" ~ And my deepest heart rejoices within the absolute belief that someday, "You & Your Mother & Father Shall Be Reunited Again, Upon 'The Streets of Paradises Forevermores Gold!!!'" ~ If I could impart one thought unto "Your Beautiful Self" taken from "This Treasures Poem of Yours" ~ ....Cont:)
Rhinem Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 4:05 PM
~ "The Magnificent Splendors of 'Your Glorious Radiant Heart & Soul; Soo Absolutely Beautiful, You Are!!!'" ~ Smile, I want to "Thank You Dear Audrey," for "Your" many kind and deeply appreciated coms unto myself; so moving, coming from such "A Beautiful & Precious Soul As Your Own!!!" ~ And of course, just as "Your Priceless Self Dear Lady, This Beautiful Poem Into My Faves;" that I may view "Its Majesticness," time and time again ~ ....Cont:)
Rhinem Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 3:58 PM
Smile ~ "So Extremely Beautiful; Soft & Serene; Colourful Images Laced Amid Wisdoms, Memories & Dreams; 'Love;' Painting 'Yourself Soo Very Vibrantly Beautiful, Precious & Priceless Audrey Carey!!!'" ~ "You" have journied soo very far it seems within the amazing depths and even quality if this were possible of "Your Wonderous Poetic Verse" since the first moment of which my enchanted eyes ever glimpsed upon ~ ....Cont:)
Gokul Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 10:45 AM
To say that i drank it in slowly and i lost myself in it... beautiful, lovely write. its been a long time and its good to be back. have posted a new poem, a rather small and humble one.
Neels Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 9:24 PM
A beautiful moving write which I'm sure has your mom smiling as she looks down on you Audrey, love Wilma
Sweetheart Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 8:55 PM
A stunning tribute to Mama Audrey my BBF.. consider putting it in Paula's new contest..awesome piece.. well its official.. am a married Mrs. "Sweetheart" now.. all went well and lovely... so happy too..luv.. ciao.. appreciate all your well wishes and blessings.. to us..both..
Mehta Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 8:34 PM
You have paid a nice touchy tribute to your mama with this creative write, Audrey
Taylor Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 8:18 PM
Wow, what an outstanding tribute to your mom. She must have been really proud of you. What a well written heartfelt piece, Audrey. Nice going. She''ll be watching over you. God bless. luv Ralph
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August 22, 2010 at 7:19 PM
Your mother must have been a very wise woman to have raised such a wonderful young lady, Dimples. I was very moved by the images, especially watching her sew and listening to her sing. I used to do the same thing with my mother. Love, Carolyn
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