Mama's Battle Cry

He slapped her soft brown face:
With bitter words, no embrace
The house became just a place.

Thirteen down the line,
A catholic family out of time
At night behind bedroom doors---cryin'.

"United we stand," Mama cried.
A hard smack from the back of his hand.
"United we stand," Mama cried.

We kicked him out, out.
Little sister does not pout
And the boys can go out.
Mama can sing and dance about.

"United we stand," Mama cries.
But scars stain and memory never dies.
Years and it's still in their eyes.
"United we stand," Mama cries.
And I hope we will before she dies.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 8:01 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest. I wish you the best in the final round Jas. Love, Carol
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April 30, 2011 at 8:09 PM
I am new here Noticed your poem and wanted to say I really like it. I love reading things you can relate too and like to think thats why a lot of us write to help others in our new/old situations. Very nice
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April 30, 2011 at 4:32 PM
Jas, very nice, emotional and touching. I love it, very interesting subject. Congratulations my friend. Ernilando
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April 30, 2011 at 2:03 PM
Wow What a powerful piece. I love this. I have quite a few poems with an abuse theme. (Surrender, Just maybe, Watching from the Window and One single touch) Check them out. Very touching. Thank you for sharing. Jodie Q
Love Avatar
April 30, 2011 at 12:52 PM
I like it. Very interesting to me.
Kendrick Avatar
April 30, 2011 at 7:37 AM
Sad thing abuse of anyone whether it be emotional, physical, or psychological..Very touching work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara
Brown Avatar
April 27, 2011 at 5:29 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Jas. Love, Carol
Regan Avatar
April 25, 2011 at 1:04 PM
Really glad you liked Delysia...thanks.
Mehta Avatar
April 25, 2011 at 7:55 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Jas
Hendricks Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 7:56 AM
Good write, Jas. I like.
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