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Mama's Battle Cry

He slapped her soft brown face: With bitter words, no embrace The house became just a place. Thirteen down the line, A catholic family out of time At night behind bedroom doors---cryin'. "United we stand," Mama cried. A hard smack from the back of his hand. "United we stand," Mama cried. We kicked him out, out. Little sister does not pout And the boys can go out. Mama can sing and dance about. "United we stand," Mama cries. But scars stain and memory never dies. Years and it's still in their eyes. "United we stand," Mama cries. And I hope we will before she dies.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/4/2011 8:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest. I wish you the best in the final round Jas. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/30/2011 8:09:00 PM
I am new here Noticed your poem and wanted to say I really like it. I love reading things you can relate too and like to think thats why a lot of us write to help others in our new/old situations. Very nice
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Date: 4/30/2011 4:32:00 PM
Jas, very nice, emotional and touching. I love it, very interesting subject. Congratulations my friend. Ernilando
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Date: 4/30/2011 2:03:00 PM
Wow What a powerful piece. I love this. I have quite a few poems with an abuse theme. (Surrender, Just maybe, Watching from the Window and One single touch) Check them out. Very touching. Thank you for sharing. Jodie Q
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Date: 4/30/2011 12:52:00 PM
I like it. Very interesting to me.
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Date: 4/30/2011 7:37:00 AM
Sad thing abuse of anyone whether it be emotional, physical, or psychological..Very touching work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara
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Date: 4/27/2011 5:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Jas. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/25/2011 1:04:00 PM
Really glad you liked Delysia...thanks.
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Date: 4/25/2011 7:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Jas
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Date: 4/11/2011 7:56:00 AM
Good write, Jas. I like.
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