Mama Say

Iris, thanks so much for your positive input on the poem and Susan and my repartee. As you obviously know, taking risks and experimenting in poetry can be challenging. So many poets see things one way. You, on the other hand, are experienced and open. That is validating and helpful to know. I'm most appreciative of your visit and comments.

Stepping out of your own shoes into someone else's is a great use of dramatic and creative license. I applaud your empathy, to see life through another's eyes, to give it voice so eloquently, to be willing to internalize their struggles, and then, give it a pulse with your talented pen. Most can only write from their own narrow perspective, quite limiting their artistic experience I think. I have spoken in an old man's voice in my poem "The Irony Of Fate". To speak in another's voice takes one who is open and willing to surrender to different facets of their artistic soul.. I think your artistic soul gives itself readily to emotions and freedoms of expression, and dares the reader to be transported by the same. You're a poetic rebel and I revel in it! :) A shortsighted audience has been the bane of many great artists and poets (like Vermeer and John Keats).. consider yourself in great company, my friend :)) Your intellect, the freedom of your pen and your talent are to be admired.

I may have overstepped with this poem to this audience. Maybe. Attribution (a white man writing the voice of a black women) may haunt me. That being said, you Susan, surely get it and I thank you sincerely for it. It helps to have support. Be well dear poetess.