Mama

Sadness is a place I lived in for years.
 NO MORE!
 I'm finding my way OUT.
 Cool windy days are best...
 They blow away uncertainty
 and remind me of vegetable soup...and NPR.
 And the rain is brain colored...
 And the thunder sounds just like
 something remembering something
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June 20, 2014 at 12:50 PM
LuAnne,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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June 19, 2014 at 4:07 PM
W~elcome to poetrysoup. E~mblem of the best poetry website which gives you; l~ove that comes from richness of her words, c~ourage to harden your faith against writer's block, o~rientation toward being the best bard, m~emories about famous poems and poets. E~mbrace this lovely website LUANNE. T~his is a caring community o~f all pleasant poems and prettiest poets. P~oet is a bard known for his o~rderly composition of words to e~ncourage love and peace, t~ransparent truth and reality, r~hymes of time and beauty of nature, y~ellowjournalism and comedy. S~oup is what we dissolve our food with. O~ne who dissolve his life in poetry soup will be u~pgraded.Please LUANNE cook for the world; "p~oetrysoup"
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June 19, 2014 at 4:03 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, LuAnne. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. Enjoy!
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June 19, 2014 at 11:07 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,LuAnne :) - I choose your first very well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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June 19, 2014 at 12:33 AM
Luanne, a heartfelt poem. I do hope you find your way out... Thank you for the deep poem,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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June 18, 2014 at 11:28 PM
Wow!! what a fall in with a simple yet memorable write, Welcome to PS LuAnne I believe you will find this family a great one just like i did, hope to follow up your artistic skill each time you drop in a poem Your new PS friend RRC
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June 19, 2014 at 12:03 AM
Thank you so much RRC!
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