Mama

Skeletal, shriveled,
your shell is a delicate,
dry and brittle casing, soon shed.
Now, age accumulates and,
exiled and bewildered, all free choice fled,
death is an unknown terror.
You miss your home,
cannot understand how,
to those who once bent to your will,
you've faded to a shadow,
powerless, almost forgot,
a consequence of the natural order.
Enjoy the moments in the sun,
your food, your precious breath
that I listen for at night.
So changed, I cling -- and mourn 
Your life. Your stroke
has paralyzed us both.
Cloaked in love, my pity
is but another grievous
wound you bear.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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April 27, 2011 at 8:41 PM
A deep moving poem.. Enjoyed your poem:-) take care..p.d.
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April 27, 2011 at 5:00 PM
Larry my comments are not working. Anne Rutherford
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April 27, 2011 at 4:58 PM
LARRY , sad and heartfelt poem, the line ,Your stroke has parlyzed us both. is mounumental. You got the feelings down that we all feel yet do not verbalize. aewsome writing. Anne
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April 27, 2011 at 9:41 AM
This is going to be a tough contest...Another great piece
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