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went to see my folks just about an hour drive seems so much longer but each time I go it's better than I expect she is totally changing legacy from control freak to kindness beautiful to watch this transformation right before my very eyes could probably learn to treat my fam'ly to a lil bit of the same dad still sits silent

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Date: 10/17/2010 5:02:00 PM
Great Haiku! I like your style.
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Date: 10/17/2010 8:56:00 AM
Nice bunch of haiku. enjoyed it, kristi
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Date: 10/17/2010 8:11:00 AM
Hi Kristi This a nice little poem and it also teaches forgiveness.So many people do not allow for change after human error through genuine remorse.We all have much to learn often through other's mistakes.Also of course we can be inspired by the goodness of other's through their transformation.Thank you for sharing these words they gave me food for thought. And I did like the poem. luv June(sylvia)
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