Autumn Ehrhardt Poet Verse

Mallory

Color Your World Contest: Mallory

A royal velvet
A lilac flower
Colorful power
Amethyst carat
Favorite pallet

She loves it more
Deep meaningful
Girl beautiful
Streaked in her hair

Artist wild
Brush in hand
Dip it in

Across
Canvas

Whirl

(Diminished Hexaverse)
Copyright 2011 Autumn Ehrhardt

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Robert Pettit January 1, 2012 at 11:30 PM It is not easy to write a good diminished hexaverse poem, but it appears you have turned the trick here. Good write.

Margeret Bailey October 27, 2011 at 7:16 PM Very creative write!

Margeret Bailey October 12, 2011 at 6:52 PM Lovely!

Kabuteng P.Ink K. August 5, 2011 at 12:54 PM I really liked how you depict Mallory here relating her with a color and painting (lucky girl to have this poem for her) -- you've worked this form really well-- that last line gives this just the right touch of whimsy, :)

Andrea Dietrich July 22, 2011 at 11:26 AM I love these kinds of forms. Great final line for that whirl of most beautiful hue!

Carol Sunshine Brown July 11, 2011 at 11:33 AM Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Autumn. I enjoyed reading it this lovely day. May you have a wonderful week and enjoy life to the fullest. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud July 11, 2011 at 10:05 AM oh my... wonderful, autumn! soup mail! :) huggs, nette