Mallory

Color Your World Contest: Mallory

A royal velvet
A lilac flower
Colorful power
Amethyst carat
Favorite pallet

She loves it more
Deep meaningful
Girl beautiful
Streaked in her hair

Artist wild
Brush in hand
Dip it in

Across
Canvas

Whirl

(Diminished Hexaverse)
Copyright 2011 Autumn Ehrhardt

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/1/2012 11:30:00 PM
It is not easy to write a good diminished hexaverse poem, but it appears you have turned the trick here. Good write.
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Date: 10/27/2011 7:16:00 PM
Very creative write!
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Date: 10/12/2011 6:52:00 PM
Lovely!
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Date: 8/5/2011 12:54:00 PM
I really liked how you depict Mallory here relating her with a color and painting (lucky girl to have this poem for her) -- you've worked this form really well-- that last line gives this just the right touch of whimsy, :)
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Date: 7/22/2011 11:26:00 AM
I love these kinds of forms. Great final line for that whirl of most beautiful hue!
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Date: 7/11/2011 11:33:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Autumn. I enjoyed reading it this lovely day. May you have a wonderful week and enjoy life to the fullest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/11/2011 10:05:00 AM
oh my... wonderful, autumn! soup mail! :) huggs, nette
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